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Reviewed By: Bizkattballgurl9 On: February 06, 2005 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGGG please update this fic soon!!!!! This is such a kewl story! OMG i love it so much.
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Reviewed By: Someone non exitistes On: December 11, 2004 12:54 CST
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Please update it again!!! I love this story! Everytime I come on I check to see if you have updated it yet. Please keep updating ASAP!
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Reviewed By: KewlKat On: December 11, 2004 12:52 CST
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Please update it again!!! I love this story! Everytime I come on I check to see if you have updated it yet. Please keep updating ASAP!
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Reviewed By: ShadowFox14 On: September 11, 2004 17:58 CDT
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i agree w/the other ppls, hurry up and get more chaps up!
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Reviewed By: kalie On: June 27, 2004 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! I think that this fic is REALLY good. I hope that u have the next chapter up soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kalie On: June 27, 2004 21:43 CDT
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Wow!! I think that this fic is REALLY good. I hope that u have the next chapter up soon!!!!!!!!!
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Title: update!!
Reviewed By: neko_ youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update!!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer5888 On: May 05, 2004 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style I'm not to picky on as long as it flows well. I only found minor errors with spelling & grammer. O/C fairly decent has some familar qualities but it's not totaly predictable. Enjoyment I love it. You have some great humor with sarcasim and darkness too. You also have some very deep and stiring qualities in your story which add depth. I would like you to email me when you have a new chapter up. My email karissa.h.borders@us.army.mil
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Reviewed By: Jenn-chan On: March 06, 2004 03:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! i wan more chapters! update lar
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Reviewed By: daydreamer5888 On: February 21, 2004 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I have been waiting for a long time to read the next chapter... WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!!!
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Title: WRITE MORE!!
Reviewed By: Jenn-chan On: January 25, 2004 05:46 CST
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pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls write more! PLS!!!!!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer5888 On: January 24, 2004 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please write more chapters!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer5888 On: January 22, 2004 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is soooooo goood! The characters are so funny! I love this story please write more!
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Reviewed By: Kamino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 05:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
As of right now it's a bit short to give my full opinion on it; but I see a lot of potental in this fanfic. You have an intresting style that's quick-paced and your characters are bold as well as amusing. Hitomi is a lot different though, is that due to her parents' death? Critique points: 1. I noticed about 4 spelling errors, oh and it's Gaia by the way. =^.^= 2. During the scuffle in the first chapter, there was a point where it got confusing as to who was doing what to whom. Maybe you miked around a couple of 'he' and 'she' s? I really like this piece and I do hope you continue. ^^ ~Kami
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