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Reviewed By: Chiba On: November 24, 2003 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. You should try making the chapters longer though. You know you could also use spell check when you're done writing a chapter. It really annoys me when people have a million words mis-spelled in one chapter. That's just my helpful hint for the day. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: 4U2NV On: November 24, 2003 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Claps* Bravo, Bravo you made this chapter longer. Yeah D.G. and I know eachother. Like I predicted she hit me for telling you that she was wrong in the head in the last chapter. She's actually a very violent girl if you tease her enough. Go figure.(Think Akane if you know the "Ranma 1/2 series") Pure twins if you cut her hair short. Anyways great chappie. I can't wait for you to update.
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Reviewed By: 4U2NV On: November 21, 2003 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooooooooooooohhhhh.........this is SOOOO good! Don't listen to D.G.(dreaming girl) she's wrong in the head if you know what I mean. You should see what she wears. Tsk,tsk,tsk,how embaressing. She's probably gonna kill me for that but it's the truth. Anyway back to the story I think that you could make the chapters a tad bit longer but other then that it's perfect. Vote:Inu/Kag
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Reviewed By: Gin Aibu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 13:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is a really good story. How many good stories are you writing at the same time?
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Reviewed By: sesshylover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 07:04 CST
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Hello! I still love your fanfic. It is one of the best! I have a another question. You know when Shippo said Inuyasha said something like Nee Amata........ zutto zutto zutto, is that from the second ending of Chobits? I was watching it yesterday when Shinbo kissed the teacher(i was shocked) then that song came on and it sounded familiar. I could be wrong, but i just wanted to ask. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sango Taijiya On: November 18, 2003 20:41 CST
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this is a great story! i vote for 'Gome to be paired with Yusuke. Is the little black blur Hiei? Cause he's the only one who can go that fast, besides Sesshou-sama. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(not signed in) On: November 18, 2003 20:29 CST
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i liked the new chappie please update soon
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Reviewed By: M52 On: November 18, 2003 17:47 CST
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Cool story. I vote Yus/Kag. I think those two would be good together.
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Reviewed By: sesshylover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 11:56 CST
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So far i love your story. Very Suspenseful. I think the blur is Inuyasha. I think he's looking for Kagome. I vote fo Inuyasha and Kagome! I also thought it was cute that sango had a daughter. Your story is great! There was only one part that i was very unhappy about. When sesshomaru died! It made me sooooo sad because he was my favoritest charachter in the world but anyway I still love your story. Keep up the exellent work and update soon!
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Title: Valkyrie Nienna Helyanw
Reviewed By: Valkyrie Nienna Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 00:36 CST
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eh heh. i just remembered that koga died in the beginning. it sucks that i remembered that after i hit submit but oh well. it must be inu cause duh, you wouldnt have it as a pairing. but i still want yusuke
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Title: Valkyrie Nienna Helyanw
Reviewed By: Valkyrie Nienna Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 00:34 CST
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uh, yusuke/kag and is the person inuyasha or koga or hiei or kurama. but i think it is koga, maybe, i dont know
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Title: cool !!
Reviewed By: princessann [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yusuke yusuke yusuke and plz plz plz plz update update pudate ill be waitng for your update and e-mail me when you do!!
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Reviewed By: Natala On: November 16, 2003 20:00 CST
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Bwuhaha! I have found a story that has potential to be a Yus/Kag on mediaminer! I shall now dance for all eternity. *Dances for five seconds then gets bored* Ok, bored, I vote Yus/Kag, obviously. And I'll take a page from Kenra's book and pull out a Yus/Kag flag! Heh. A flaggie with my favorite pairing. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I'm going to be totally honest. At first during the beginning I thought it was Inuyasha who died and I totally cried my eyes out then I finished reading the chapter and figured out it was Kouga. My face faulted like this O_o . So far you've earned 5 stars from me baby. ***** . Continue please. Inu/kag is my vote because I read some more and figured out later that Shippo said he died THEN I cried my eyes out. It was so adorable how you brought Shippo back into this he's all like "Can I sleep with you like old times?". Another *****'s for that. BUT IF you make Inuyasha some dead corpse like Kikyou and have them fall in love with eachother I'll hunt you down and kill you. J/K lol! Please don't do that though. Oh My God this is my longest review O_o I better stop now before I strain my fingers. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: DannyKen23 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 06:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. I vote for Yusuke
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