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Title: w00t and a half
Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not logged on) On: April 12, 2005 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story so far. Please keep up the great work and update asap. I can't wait to find out how Dee and Ryo will survive this ^^ -Krystal-
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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: March 26, 2005 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated!! I've been waiting forever!!! It's a great story, pleeeease keep going and finish it!!
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Reviewed By: Catalyst of Death On: February 17, 2005 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was crying from your last chapter. Which is strange because I have never cried in about 8 years. Your story was very moving. I hope that wasn't the last chapter of this story. I would like to know if Ryo would change his mind and get Dee back, or will it end in angst.
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Reviewed By: moni On: January 23, 2005 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story,please update the next chapter fast!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kyeda On: January 19, 2005 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story! It was well thought out, well written, the characters stayed in character, and the plot was original and interesting. I loved Dee's personal day, and all the thought you seem to put into each character. I'm sorry that it is as yet unfinished, and hope you will consider completing it as I would love to see how it ends! Thanx for the great story!
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Reviewed By: Kyeda On: January 19, 2005 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story! It was well thought out, well written, the characters stayed in character, and the plot was original and interesting. I loved Dee's personal day, and all the thought you seem to put into each character. I'm sorry that it is as yet unfinished, and hope you will consider completing it as I would love to see how it ends! Thanx for the great story!
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Reviewed By: Kyeda On: January 19, 2005 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story! It was well thought out, well written, the characters stayed in character, and the plot was original and interesting. I loved Dee's personal day, and all the thought you seem to put into each character. I'm sorry that it is as yet unfinished, and hope you will consider completing it as I would love to see how it ends! Thanx for the great story!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 19:16 CDT
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Hey, where's the next chapter?!?! Hehehe, I want it here soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nah, no offense, I just love this story so much. You have to hurry and get the next chapter out soooooooon!!!!!!! Keep writing pwease!
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Reviewed By: Serpenteyes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaah! *sniffles* That was so sad! Ahem. *clears throat and dries tears* I'm glad you're back! This was very well written, and I sincerly hope you will keep writing. Please update on Time for healing: aftermath.
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Reviewed By: aishie On: June 13, 2004 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls pls continue. this is so wonderful. i love the way you write. you're so great! each chapter unfolds in the best of its own way. its more than pleasure..its also a learning experience. i love that moment with bikky and dee. that got me a lot!
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Reviewed By: Athena-Lee On: February 04, 2004 20:58 CST
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Ok, its ten at night ad i gotta be getting to bed now. Ill read the rest tommorow.Im putting this on my favorites cause Im really enjoying it. Goodnight
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Title: Sniff....
Reviewed By: Special_K On: January 02, 2004 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Irish, You're turning me into a Sap! But it's okay, I don't mind! *^-^*
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Reviewed By: Cole'sLover On: December 13, 2003 12:09 CST
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Irish, I just wanted to say AWESOME. I cried like a baby after reading this last chapter. You have a way of writing that brings the characters to life. You give so much depth to their personalities and feelings. You keep writing and I'll keep reading. I am a diehard FAKE fangirl and I appreciate the hard work you put into your stories.
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Reviewed By: Turin, but i didn't log on anymore On: December 07, 2003 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not very often that i'm open to new characters, but the characters you created fit perfectly! n.n Hope this story will be finished! I'm still shocked that Bikky behaved... O.o nice... might try that with my brother...
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Title: A lovely Irish Stew
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're such an observer, Irish, and you give the reader so much in terms of characters and interaction. You put almost as much effort into characters you may never use again as to your main ones, giving us charming detailed portraits of the shopkeeper, the orphans, the priest. The scene with Rose was well done. You show Dee's increasing turmoil and vulnerability. Lovely interaction between Dee and Penguin. It occurs to me you that you throw so many different elements into your writing, then let them simmer until the flavors marry. Your prose is like a rich Irish stew,nourishing and full of flavor. As much pain as Dee is in, I see that Ryo too is suffering and his crisis of faith is a big part of that, I think. Looking forward eagerly to your next chapter.
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