| "'Til You Return to Me" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: December 13, 2003 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm great chapter. loved the update. they are just so cute together. and shippou is adorable. well thanks for updating.
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Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright you update! *victory dance* Not me, my friend Ashika does the dancing, I suck at them (he does too, *sssh* don't tell), anyway the both of us are very glad you updated! And hope you do more soon :)
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Reviewed By: IWantMoreIY On: December 10, 2003 10:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As the name goes, I Want More InuYasha! I want more of this fic especially. I HATE it when great writers create excellent stories and I can't finish because they're not done! Write more! More! MORE! I'll set my armies upon you and hold you at swordpoint if you don't.... *evil grin and laugh* seriously... I'm hoping for Inu/Kag. And more updates.
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Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay an update!
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute story so far. i have enjoyed reading it. i hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 07:50 CST
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Oh, man I need more this story is so good! I can not wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Shadow~Magician [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 07:11 CST
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Oh yay! I really like this story! *clicks it onto favorites* hehe! I really like how much you describe everything. A very well written fic! Your style of writing kinda reminds me of my own, but I like the way you describe things anyway! lol! And from the looks of it, it looks like an Inu/Kag fic. ^_^ my fav pairing. I dont really like anything else... just doesnt seem right... oh crap Im off topic again, aren't I? Ah well, very nice story and I hope that you continue with it for a while!
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Title: Beautiful....
Reviewed By: B.W. authoress On: November 30, 2003 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write somemore please.!
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Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 11:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the part with the youkai having stripes (with those colors? *blah face*), just picturing it was really giving me a headache. Also I did not know 'oi' was properly said for only males, (I've been saying it as an exclamation for ages, I am quite fond of the word; also my friend's grandmother is...ano... I think Vietnamese and uses it often like I do). Yeah and I am probably not going to stop using the word either (eh heh). I am kind of surprised Miroku didn't hit on Kagome (well the serious situation could probably be the answer...) Anyway I think it's cool how you made Kagome a miko (I love the outfit of a miko *and Kikyo's hairstyle* it's cool *i know that word can get old* Also I think this is the proper names for the attire of the miko~ a white top 'hakui',long red skirt pants called a "hakama". The hair is styled 'tarashigami',a straight ponytail tied down to hang down your back with a white ribbon (*info from Shrine Maiden). Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 01:54 CST
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This is a really good story so far. I can not wait to see what happens when InuYasha is fully awake. Please, please, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Gome-chan On: November 25, 2003 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a GREAT story! I can't wait to read more...update soon, PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update! yay for updates!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: November 22, 2003 15:41 CST
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*sniff* poor kagome... u need inuyasha 2 heal her broken heart! (gawd that was corny...) but seriously!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 18:01 CST
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WRITE MORE!!! i can't WAIT untill inuyasha meets kagome! or at least i hope it's an inu/kag story! is it? PLEASE UPDATE AND MAKE IT INU/KAG!!! PPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE E!!????!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Fuyumiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Can't wait for your next chapter! *grins, stops with the creeped out looks I am getting* Mum always said I wasn't one for smiles...
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