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"The Best Defense" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ]
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 Reviewed By: fire and flame  On: January 04, 2004 14:11 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! You just Have to write more!
 Title: yayayayayay!!
Reviewed By: foxflame - not signed in-  On: January 04, 2004 13:37 CST
Comment/Review:
i noe i already reviewd but... oh well. new chapters, new revz. I thought it wuz pretty ironic wit that hole draco n harry thingyy....lol. i like wea this stry is goin. n bout that "shadowy figure voice a mo bobbi thingy..." the first person that came 2 mah mind is Karasu... u noe that hole 'i love Kurama thing'. i think it wuld fit pretty good wit the stry.( buh ur the riter not me!)keep goin! n if u EVA take that long agan wit ur updates i will b.... um........ angery!!! yes angery!!(hehe-- sugar rush--0 keep goin... your gettin to the best parts.
 Reviewed By: Katyfromaol  On: January 04, 2004 06:40 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am soo happy you updated!! Sorry about your computer! I hate that when it happens. This chapter was great!! I really think it should be a anima; from the forest instead of him. You have alot of the cast of yyh already!! needs a little more potter if you want to know what i think. If not disreguard this!! It is a very good story though!!
 Reviewed By: Almighty Neko-chan  On: January 01, 2004 22:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Come on, woman! UPDATE! You're taking way too long! I need to read more... your story is good. The Harry/Draco thing was kinda odd though... I cant really picture either of them a gay. But whatever floats your boat, I guess.
 Reviewed By: Foxflame [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 09, 2003 20:42 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i usually hate cross overs of any kind buh i luv this.... wuh takin so long..... hurr y n rite!!! i reeleeeeee likeeee thiss stryyyy
 Reviewed By: japbookfan  On: November 25, 2003 18:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi it's me again! Hurry up and update soon, I love your story!
 Reviewed By: Uriko&Seiyuri [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 24, 2003 20:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey. I love the chapter but i still hate the idea that MY lover Touya is yaoi *cries* Anyways. My character is as follows. Pink hait braided like that of Genkai, yellow eyes liek that of a cat adn she is supposed ot be a demon YES DEMONH!!! So i guess i'm on teh bad side. WAAAAAAAAHHH!!!! I WANTED TO BE WITH MY LOVER TOUYA!!!! Oh well. Keep writing. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Seiyuri: I love it and sorry for the distress of Uriko. We love the fic keep it up and please please put in more Hiei/Kurama yaoi.
 Reviewed By: Yo-ma [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 24, 2003 18:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi! It's me just checking on something ok!
 Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 23, 2003 21:01 CST
Comment/Review:
That was so cool giid idea to send the Urimeshe Team to Hogwarts School ofwitch Craft and Wizardry. Plz update soon
 Title: Kyo & Yukiro
Reviewed By: Little Yukiro [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 23, 2003 15:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Kyo: GREAT STORY!! ^_^ the Harry/Draco yaoi thingie was.....unexpected, but I wanna find out what happens so please please PLEASE UPDATE! PRETTY PLEASE? Yukiro: this is their fifth year right? I just finished reading Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix an---and *sobs* Kyo: *sweatdrops; pats Yukiro on the head* there there, what she wants to say is that Serius died >.> Yukiro: *blinks at being patted* well, anyways...........UPDATE!! YOU'VE JUST GOT TO!! Kyo: *anime falls and gets up again* what happened to the water works? Yukiro: what water work? *is clueless...*
 Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 23, 2003 14:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it!! THe whole sword thing with Jin was cool!! Add more real soon!
 Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 19, 2003 21:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it so far!! Hiei getting mad!! I just hope that their wil be some intamaite moments between the two!! Update soon!
 Reviewed By: the_cuteness  On: November 17, 2003 17:49 CST
Comment/Review:
i love it write more
 Title: Uriko
Reviewed By: sentimental_darkness [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 15, 2003 17:40 CST
Comment/Review:
LOVELY LOVELY i love to read this story again and again. I just have one question to ask about it though.... can you please not make Touya a yaoi guy. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! i can't picture it in my head and i really don't want to so can he stay straight? Oh well. Keep up the good work i am hoping to see the next chapter soon
 Reviewed By: Washu-chanAndSeiyuri-chanAND WHO COULD FORGETuriko-chan  On: November 14, 2003 19:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Washu: Hello! i am Washu! ^_^ Love the story so far! i think the best part was--- Seiyuri: *interrupts* KURAMA!! *huggles kurama* I love him and i think the best part was when him adn Hiei were being their usual Yaoi selves. *hugs Hiei too, hates neglecting fellow demons* Washu: you interrupted me girl!! grrr.. *clings to jin and hiei* THEY ARE MINE! you get kurama! anyways---*gets cut off again* Uriko-chan: AND I GET TOUYA-SAN! Washu: that's nice.. now.. please update.. we all three LOVE your story!!! mooooore yaoi between kurama and hiei.. maybe even some between harry and draco? *the other two raise their eye brows at her* WHAT?! i happen to like that pairing.. Seiyuri-chan: *rolls eyes* what ever.. update soon!!! Uriko-chan: YA! and if it's possible..can we be in the story too? as students? PLEASE?? *all three beg and offer sugar and other good things* *all three*: BAII!!!!
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