| "Stronger Than Yesterday" Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: April 16, 2004 20:54 CDT
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ouch, that must hurt...
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Title: Kalima "Kitsune Yokai"
Reviewed By: o0ShadowXFox0o [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing. You've an eminse amount of talent. I love the story line. What I wanna know is does Kagome have a love interest in this story. I don't mean Inuyasha either. Anyway, I enjoyed your story. Hope you update soon. Good luck and God bless.
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Reviewed By: Mefdet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 19:59 CDT
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Very interesting fic! What's the pairing. Is Kagome even gonna get paired with someone? Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: kitroku Rodshi On: April 15, 2004 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story please continue it it's really funny well hope you continue soon Ja:)
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Title: heh
Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: April 15, 2004 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol this is pretty funny UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Mistriss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 22:54 CDT
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Oh my god! that was really awsome! Kagome totally kicked ASS! don't get her drunk again. thats all that i ask! That is really cool; the way you made Kagome beat up Yusuke! update soon plz!
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Reviewed By: kage kitsune On: April 14, 2004 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEZZZZZ update this fic real soon!! Is sesshy or Shippou, or Inu or Kikyo, or even Naraku gonna show up? Maybe a demon Sango and Miroku could show up!
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Reviewed By: BRL On: April 14, 2004 20:06 CDT
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*breathes out* Whoo, boy. Okay. I really like this story, right. But, you are writing Kagome WAY out of character. She would never wear the clothing you are putting in, unless she was: 1.high 2.drunk 3.not Kagome or 4.a combination of these 3. She is acting way to raunchy for her character type--she can be silly and funny and at times stupid, but you are writing her as a space cadet. (someone who zones out then comes back to "tune in" as if nothing happened) and she is not. The scene with the lengerie, for example, was a perfect "Kagome Reaction". The song "left right, left right", however cute, was not really necessary. You are the author, however, and I can not rightly criticize you for things that I think you've done wrong. This is JUST my opinion, and I am asking you as your reader to please consider, for future references, changing the way you write Kagome. Thank you for your time. ~~~~~~Black Rose Lady~~~~~~~~~~
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: April 14, 2004 18:21 CDT
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Ahhhhhh! *hides* Too...Much...Kagome...Bashing! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! No more bashing, unless its Kuwabaka! please, dont bash her anymore!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon! I want to know what happens next! And can you please make this a kag/hiei fic?
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Title: Hahahahaha
Reviewed By: Kaiyo Azalea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Man That Chapter was great I couldn't stop laughing! Ohhhhh, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Nya!! :3 ^-.-^/
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Reviewed By: Shadow Elementalist Kitsune On: March 31, 2004 06:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow its good keep it up I love the story line by the way
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Reviewed By: inuyuyurrk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 03:31 CST
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I think Hiei is awesome!!! I luv the story so far...PLZZ update soon!!!
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Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great i love how you write! i try writing like this but its not exactly good :) -mint
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Reviewed By: FrbddnAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when are you going to update? this is excellent. please update soon this is great!!!
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