| "Kagome's Revenge" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lila-chan On: November 19, 2003 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiyas! I think that the idea is great! Try to work on the spelling and grammer...but don't let that get you down! ^*^ update soon! ^*^
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Reviewed By: Takara On: November 19, 2003 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that the idea is GREAT!!! You HAVE to continue this story! Kagome making Inuyasha pay...now that's something I want to see in the real series...^______^ Please update it soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (the comments about Kikyo are funny too...)
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Reviewed By: Kasia Matsubishi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 14:30 CST
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i find this ficcy interesting i always thought kag wasn't as happy as she acts anyways update soon or i shall send the evil plot bunnies after you! love, bishis, and sprite remixed -kasia matsubishi
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Reviewed By: link2910 (not signed on) On: November 16, 2003 20:02 CST
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ok, this is a good concept but is english your native language? if it is your spelling and grammar are awful and if it isnt disregard this last comment. i understand why you hate Kikyo im not a big fan of hers either byt understand that she does not have a full soul and all she really knows now is anger, her soul was resurrected and then taken again so try to understand it from her point of view. im a BIG fan of Inuyasha/Kagome though :)
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: November 16, 2003 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far! ^-^ It is very original, sort of, but the part where Kag is going to make Inu pay in a 'good' way...hmmmm...I wonder. Um, sorry to say but, um, to be blunt, your grammar and puncuation sucks. *winces* The spell check is your friend. ^-^ Update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
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One thing I hate about fan fiction: Authors who add their 'little comments' every other line. Just put asteriks or something that lead to a footnote at the bottom of the page, it get's quite annoying seeing them constantly. And the fact you have no spaces in between your punctuation and the words after them is also a bother. Maybe you should revise this.
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Reviewed By: Ishtaral On: November 15, 2003 16:17 CST
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Your story has a good begining except for your spelling and grammer which makes it alittle hard know what your writing at times, but still good job and keep writing.
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Reviewed By: link2910 (not signed on) On: November 15, 2003 14:56 CST
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ok, this is a good concept but is english your native language? if it is your spelling and grammar are awful and if it isnt disregard this last comment. i understand why you hate Kikyo im not a big fan of hers either byt understand that she does not have a full soul and all she really knows now is anger, her soul was resurrected and then taken again so try to understand it from her point of view. im a BIG fan of Inuyasha/Kagome though :)
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: November 15, 2003 13:51 CST
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Not bad. I think it will be interesting to see where you will be going with it.
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Reviewed By: dr1 On: November 15, 2003 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's great I like it a lot!!!XD
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