| "When Smoke Gets in Your Eyes..." Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Mysterium [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 14:30 CDT
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Awww, this story is so sweet. I know you posted it a couple years ago, but I only just read it. ^_^; I really enjoyed it. It was very touching and well-written; gotta love inu/kag fluffiness. :)
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how long this story has been out, but it's my first time reading it. I really liked it. I always could picture Inu breaking down like that. It was very touching. Though I was kinda hoping that it would have been a full fledged lemon since this is MM.org *smirks*. Maybe you could add one?...:) I'm a huge fan of your works.
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Reviewed By: happylama2202 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 13:49 CDT
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Ooo...I really do like all of your stories. If I weren't so lazy, I'd write reviews for all of them. In any case, they're great! Well written and fun to read. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: wj On: March 31, 2004 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please consider rewriting chapter 2 since this is posted on MediaMiner now. I really like the story and I'd love for you to really make it lemony like you originally intended before FF.net got stuffy. So please, please revisit chapter 2 and thank you for sharing this story with us. wj
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Reviewed By: wj On: March 31, 2004 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please consider rewriting chapter 2 since this is posted on MediaMiner now. I really like the story and I'd love for you to really make it lemony like you originally intended before FF.net got stuffy. So please, please revisit chapter 2 and thank you for sharing this story with us. wj
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 04:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was moving, sensual and well-written :D
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Title: HOW CUTE!!!!
Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 03:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooooo cute!!!! but if you want to write nc-17 stories and still have them on ff.net, all you have to do is post the lemons on mediaminer.org and take them off of ff.net and in the lemons place, you can put (go to mediaminer.org if you want to see the lemon) see, that way, no one gets hurt.... well, no one origonally DOES get hurt. I hate ff.net! they took off my story too! i didn't know they had a no lemon policy!!!lol anyways, great story, keep up the good work! arianna
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