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Reviewed By: holly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 13:58 CST
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that was just awesome.. i loved it.. i love the first on also.. it was great..
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 16, 2003 06:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for finishing the story, i really mean it, thanks. You are awesome at writing, you're halloween stories about inuyasha are also so exellent.. Keep writing!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that*sniffles* was the greatest ending to this story i loved it Manifec awsome job
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Mystic_Teardrop On: December 05, 2003 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mija, you are a true writer. Ive read Three Days of Hell and the Aftermath which i just finished. I feel deeply inlove with the characters and how you matched their personalities perfectly. My heart sobbed when the group cried. Angered when they angered. etc> I was almost into tears at the very end of your story. But one thing that i wasnt happy about WHAT ABOUT SHIPPO??? lol. i wish that you keep going with your writing and i hope that i would soon have an autograph book of yours in the future ;) Thank you for your gift of writing Sincerly Lee
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Reviewed By: Kagney On: December 05, 2003 08:10 CST
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I loved the last chapter. This was a wonderful fic. Now I'm waiting for the sequel.
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Title: Very Good!
Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, Mija. I enjoyed this fic. I know that there will be a sequel and I am awaiting it. Your fellow author, Fyrloche
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: December 02, 2003 18:05 CST
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Well I personally enjoyed those last two chapters. A warm conclusion to an eventful story. I do hope you write a sequel, if so I will be waiting. Good luck, Hououza
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Reviewed By: the quiet one [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 12:26 CST
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OHHHH!!! I loved this story! You are a wonderful writer and this was perfect! I love it! I hope to see you write more in the future!
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Slywolf On: December 02, 2003 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eee!!! GOOD JOB!!! A wonderful story/sequel! I LOVED the ending! It made my heart slench with happiness! Sooo good! I'm glad the twins killed Naraku! So sad that Kagura had to die though...*sniff* I hope Kanna died as well! How can someone be so....obedient?! Gah! Well, anyways hun, good story! Sooo glad ya made a sequel and I wish you luck on your next story!!! Lotsa Love-Lani
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: December 01, 2003 23:53 CST
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This was great! Are you going to continue this in any way? Like after the three years is up and Kagome and Inuyasha return, they visit her mother and introduce their son to his grandmother. It is just as thought.
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed in) On: December 01, 2003 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very VERY GOOD clap clap your are a great writer and I'm kinda sad seeing this story end but thanks so much for a great story. And PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!
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Reviewed By: Julie K [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW!!! That was a fabulous ending!!! I just loved it, even if I do need to go brush my teeth due to all the sugar, but I wouldn't have it any other way!! You did wrap things up nicely, even tieing back into the 1st story. The original characters were very good, I really enjoyed the addition of Kyoto and the twins. You especially made Kyoto fit in so well to the story. I also like how you have Sesshoumaru and Sango interacting. You should do a little side story for just the two of them, perhaps how they manage to work everything out. I think that has a lot of potential. Could have lots of angst and lemons in it. Anyway, I hope to hear more from you. Please write some more stories.
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Reviewed By: scarn16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 21:14 CST
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finally over and well done if i may say so. i never got a chance to review because before i could a new chapter had come out and now that it's over i have to say that throughout the story you kept me interested, and did a very good job building up their characters and relationships. i had feared you would never resolve the problems with Sango and Sesshoumaru, but you did and tied the ending together very nicely.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: sesshou_lover On: December 01, 2003 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was beautifull, the end made me cry .... it was soooo sweet. great story.......!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Scottishfae [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this fic since you started it but never reviewed. I really like how it turned out! This was a really good fic and I enjoyed thorougly! Is there a possibility for a sequel or are you going to end it here? Either way I would like to congratulate you on an excellent fic!!
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