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Reviewed By: priscel (I'm back) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 15:43 CDT
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YO!!!! DANG!! I couldn't stay away and ya know what...I gotta have more. oh man... waiting for the next update is going to be unbearable. I wanna know what's going through Duo's head with the news of Q's disappearance (I don't think he's dead... i think Wu-baby's got him). DAnG, Heero is a smug bastard ain't he! And chemistry between them sure is sparkin' but I wish Heero wasn't such a bad ass, but hey what a cute one he is and has. (^_-) *snickers* I love this fic... *puts on the puppy eyes and bats wide brown eyes with long lashes* more pleasssse.
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Reviewed By: crazy2themax On: June 04, 2004 14:52 CDT
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arrrrrrrrrhh.....i can deal with heero as arrogant and smug, but to see him actually bow down to someone and acting so blunt and "seemingly" manipulative i just feel like i want to smack him a good one. it just to show how talented you are if you make me want to do all that to a 2D character =). i feel so bad for duo since basically his life is screwed whether he gets out or stays in the palace. honestly, i'd really like to see how this involves romance between duo and heero if duo hates heero's guts for doing this to him. update!
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Reviewed By: priscel (not signed in) On: June 04, 2004 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAn!! this is good!!! i'm only on ch.2 but i have to stop and go to work now *pouts* please do update, i can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: June 04, 2004 07:06 CDT
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this fic is great! can't believe how heero is here and his new attitude. i'm also surprised duo hasn't tried anything like killing himself considering he is "useless" now. since this is a 1x2, i have to wonder how heero and duo get together since they seem to be on opposing sides and viewpoints. won't that mean that duo will be giving in to oz? please update soon! i have to find out!
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Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: June 04, 2004 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have waited so long for the update and I am not disappointed; your writing is simply GREAT! I am glad Duo finally managed to get a bruise on Heero's face. 'Smirking bastard' is the perfect term for Heero. The chapter is a little bit short though, please update ASAP!!!!! I have been checking your live journal everyday for progress of this fic, you'd turned me into a stalker!!!
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Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 08:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They fucking screwed Duo over! And what did Treize do to get Heero over to his side? Are you gonna tell in the next chappie?
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Reviewed By: aspara On: April 11, 2004 09:51 CDT
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fun!
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Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me again, hehe you updated; not that i can talk. But yeah!!! Whoa Hero is a jerk and poor Duo trapped in his cluthces. Update soon K Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 18:46 CDT
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OH MY GOD!!! This left me BREATHLESS!! Oh, Xe, this is freakin' FANTASTIC!! God, you LEFT us hanging here! You know that I'm not a malicious sporker, and I know you've got a lot in your real life going on, but darlin' if you don't write the next chapter soon, I'm gonna DIE waiting!! This is BRILLIANT!! OH MY GOD!! How sexy is Heero??? Geez louise!! And Wufei thinks he's the only one left, that all his friends have turned against him!! As much as I obviously love the 1x2ness of it all, DAMN I'm intrigued by what will be going through Wu-bear's head!! Xe, this is just so freakin' amazing! This always has been a very unique storyline, but DAMN do you have me hooked even MORE now!!
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Reviewed By: Turtle_Fire On: April 07, 2004 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo! Heero screwed Duo throughoutly without even have to unbutton his pants. How could Duo not fell in love with a Heero equipped with a touch of evil? Please update soon, very very soon! I am totally addicted to your fic! Arhhhhhh!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 21:17 CDT
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Poor Duo! I'm afraid that if he runs across any sharp objects in the very near future, he may just consider testing them out on his wrists or neck. What a dirty thing to do to him, even if it is Heero. I just hope Wuffers gets away. Thanks for not giving up on this fic!
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Title: Waiting
Reviewed By: a fan On: April 02, 2004 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this fic on your site and also the other story you have there. I love your writing. Usually I don't like to read fics with POV, but you make it work well. I can't wait to see what Heero wants with Duo. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please! Another chapter please! I have been checking everyday for update. I am totally in love with it. This fic is just too good to stop here!
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Reviewed By: Kyo Maxwell On: February 15, 2004 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well come on write more please. what are you doing the whole time of the day. You should be writting for the fans to read the fic. I need to read more pleaseeeeeeeeeee!!! This is a great story with a very,very good story line that must be going on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on ext. So do you see that you must keep on writing or what will I do with all my time when I'm not reading the fic.(AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!)*falls down dead on floor* RIP to all and all a good night
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Reviewed By: Destinys lot On: February 08, 2004 06:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can i say this is great, please keep going. The idea is originlity the flow is excellant giving every emotion it's turn. Great work, Ja ne
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