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Reviewed By: Fluffy's mate On: February 25, 2004 18:17 CST
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I agre he dose have a cute butt ^_^Huba huba Me wont to scwes his ferm butt and do ... other ..... things ^_^* but ( wow I relly like that word right now dont I ? ) UPDATE SOON !!!!! HEHE CUTE BUTT ^_^
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Reviewed By: StarChild On: February 23, 2004 15:13 CST
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that was a cute ending XD i loved it
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Reviewed By: Tiger_gurl On: February 17, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL that was funny. Very cool chapter. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 17, 2004 18:04 CST
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That was absolutelty fantastic! First the part where you have Sesshi (sorry can never remember how to spell his fully name!) tells off the tutor. Next as he runs to Rin's aid and almost sees Morgan naked. Next to mentio she is going into heat... Finally the coment about his butt was the crowning moment! Can't wait to see what happens next! Sorry to say it but on a downward note, didn't have much pof a Valentines...no cards...again...oh well. Sorry about that, good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: stephino On: February 16, 2004 17:02 CST
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you have no idea how many times i check this story every day, and i have been very disipointed by the last 2 chapers, im skipping sections and is just lame, i dont like the wolf pack idea at all, and its a shame cause i loved courtship
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Reviewed By: Fluffy's bich On: February 10, 2004 20:35 CST
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hurry the fuck up and update i'm os loving you story
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 10, 2004 17:40 CST
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Progressing very nicely! Really enjoyed that chapter even if Sesshi himself wasn't in it. Story keeps getting better, wonder how the lord will react... Looking forwards to the next chapter! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: jschu25(nli) On: February 09, 2004 20:54 CST
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Great job on this chapter, there was only one or two spelling errors that I detected. One was when Morgan was trying to place Rin and her clothes "revealed" her status. And I can't think of the other one. The details are great in this story.I was wondering if you were plan on going into more details about the sister Briana? If not would you consider a side story about her. It just sounds so interesting. Be back for more...~_~ jschu25
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Reviewed By: Julie B. On: February 09, 2004 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What will happen next? What will Sesshomaru do?
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Title: first of first
Reviewed By: darkice2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 12:06 CST
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this story is starting to develope into something that i have come to enjoy and look forward to please continue with this one thanx for being a ffwriter ^_^
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Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 13:53 CST
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Loved your other story Love this one Hurry and update I know you just updated but i can't wait to read more I love this story it's good and Morgan is quite a pistol Rin is sooo adorable
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 04, 2004 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice you updated, take your time on making this, i would hate to see this becoming a failed one.. courtship was exellent and aniversary was good, i hope this will be good as well. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: jschu25(nli) On: February 02, 2004 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hi, I'm glad to see you update this story. There were a few spelling and grammar errors. The only one that I really noticed was the last sentence of your AN, Rin is bored. Take your time, again good job...jschu25
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 02, 2004 17:47 CST
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First of all that was an excellent chapter. Second of all don't worry about the updates, no-one can expect you to put your life on hold for this. I for one am happy to wait if only to enjoy the pleasure of reading such a work. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh i am very interested in this. i like it so far. i hope you update soon. that was a little gross about the afterbirth though. anyway hope to read more soon.
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