| "Worthy" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dhampir [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happened to the chapter where Rin meets Sesshy? It doesnt show up. Maybe it's my computer...If so, could ya send the chapter to my email at Jade_the_thief@yahoo.com? I'd really appreciate it. THIS STORY IS AWESOME
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Reviewed By: Missy-Bee (not logged on) On: April 20, 2004 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AW poor Rin. Got her frist blood flow. HEE HEE poor Sesshy didn't know what to do. LOL so funny.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 19, 2004 18:47 CDT
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Excellent as always! Don't worry about the updates just make them when you can! Hope all goes well! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 08:34 CDT
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Wait! What disturbing news??!?!?!? Is he sick? Did he die? What's going on?? Please don't hurt the little baby! *sniff* You're so mean, picking on a little child. Update REALLY REALLY SOON!! ^____^
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Reviewed By: Star-Child On: April 19, 2004 06:08 CDT
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nice nice ^__^ Please write more! ya did good with the double in one week ^_^ *gives cookie*
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Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: April 18, 2004 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW Rin got more fire than we all thought. Sesshomaru might find himself caught up in the worst way. LOL. Plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: ~Perra~ On: April 18, 2004 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story its funny cute and hot at all the same time its really good its one of my favorite storys keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 17, 2004 22:09 CDT
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Excellent work! Wonder how this is going to work out, you did say she was at the start of her heat cycle after all... Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Star-Child On: April 17, 2004 18:27 CDT
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Nice, keep it comin! ^_____________________^
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 08:19 CDT
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Great chapter! It's ok that you didn't get all the spelling and grammar mistakes. You got alot, and there were only a few left. I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!!! ^____^
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Title: worthy
Reviewed By: whit On: March 14, 2004 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow awesome fic you have to add another chappie to it asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fangirlofinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Fluffy's mate On: February 25, 2004 18:17 CST
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I agre he dose have a cute butt ^_^Huba huba Me wont to scwes his ferm butt and do ... other ..... things ^_^* but ( wow I relly like that word right now dont I ? ) UPDATE SOON !!!!! HEHE CUTE BUTT ^_^
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Reviewed By: StarChild On: February 23, 2004 15:13 CST
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that was a cute ending XD i loved it
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Reviewed By: Tiger_gurl On: February 17, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL that was funny. Very cool chapter. I hope you update soon.
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