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Reviewed By: ~Perra~ On: April 18, 2004 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story its funny cute and hot at all the same time its really good its one of my favorite storys keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 17, 2004 22:09 CDT
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Excellent work! Wonder how this is going to work out, you did say she was at the start of her heat cycle after all... Till next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Star-Child On: April 17, 2004 18:27 CDT
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Nice, keep it comin! ^_____________________^
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 08:19 CDT
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Great chapter! It's ok that you didn't get all the spelling and grammar mistakes. You got alot, and there were only a few left. I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!!! ^____^
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Title: worthy
Reviewed By: whit On: March 14, 2004 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow awesome fic you have to add another chappie to it asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fangirlofinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Fluffy's mate On: February 25, 2004 18:17 CST
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I agre he dose have a cute butt ^_^Huba huba Me wont to scwes his ferm butt and do ... other ..... things ^_^* but ( wow I relly like that word right now dont I ? ) UPDATE SOON !!!!! HEHE CUTE BUTT ^_^
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Reviewed By: StarChild On: February 23, 2004 15:13 CST
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that was a cute ending XD i loved it
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Reviewed By: Tiger_gurl On: February 17, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL that was funny. Very cool chapter. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 17, 2004 18:04 CST
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That was absolutelty fantastic! First the part where you have Sesshi (sorry can never remember how to spell his fully name!) tells off the tutor. Next as he runs to Rin's aid and almost sees Morgan naked. Next to mentio she is going into heat... Finally the coment about his butt was the crowning moment! Can't wait to see what happens next! Sorry to say it but on a downward note, didn't have much pof a Valentines...no cards...again...oh well. Sorry about that, good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: stephino On: February 16, 2004 17:02 CST
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you have no idea how many times i check this story every day, and i have been very disipointed by the last 2 chapers, im skipping sections and is just lame, i dont like the wolf pack idea at all, and its a shame cause i loved courtship
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Reviewed By: Fluffy's bich On: February 10, 2004 20:35 CST
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hurry the fuck up and update i'm os loving you story
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 10, 2004 17:40 CST
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Progressing very nicely! Really enjoyed that chapter even if Sesshi himself wasn't in it. Story keeps getting better, wonder how the lord will react... Looking forwards to the next chapter! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: jschu25(nli) On: February 09, 2004 20:54 CST
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Great job on this chapter, there was only one or two spelling errors that I detected. One was when Morgan was trying to place Rin and her clothes "revealed" her status. And I can't think of the other one. The details are great in this story.I was wondering if you were plan on going into more details about the sister Briana? If not would you consider a side story about her. It just sounds so interesting. Be back for more...~_~ jschu25
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Reviewed By: Julie B. On: February 09, 2004 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What will happen next? What will Sesshomaru do?
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