| "I Can Finally Say...I Love You" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: lil miss crazy On: March 26, 2004 19:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's soooooooooooooooooo loooooooooooooongggggg! BUT IT SO GOOD! i think it was really really good. good job! ::thumbs up::
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Reviewed By: Fibounette On: January 07, 2004 16:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are so many things that I loved in your story that I don't even know where to start. I admire your writing skills so much. Believe me when I say I became addicted to B/V Fanfiction thanks to stories like yours. Not only is it very well written but you managed to tell your story so well, that once I start reading it, there's no way I can tear myself away from my screen until I reach the end. I've told you that before, I'll say it again : this is one of the few stories that I can read over and over without ever getting tired of it. I melted while reading the first part, when Vegeta reflects on his feelings towards his two children. It was all so beautifully said ! I also liked the fact that you kept the original dialogue and added the characters personal thoughts to it. Also, I loved the sloooow buildup too… loved every second of it ! And the end was very sweet and romantic. Good job ;-) !
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: December 02, 2003 19:57 EST
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Great story!! Even if you don't win the little competition with this, I seriously think you should do a one-shot seuqel to this story right where the end paragraph left off. Still in Vegeta's POV of course, and write in detail about the events that happen in the restuarant while the families eat their dinner, flashbacks of the past and how Vegeta remembers being with Bulma on the island and decides to take her there after the dinner.
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Title: I Can Finally Say...
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: December 02, 2003 04:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally agree with Barb. This fic was awesome from start to finish. Great job BS!! Btw, as far as Barb's sanity goes...she has never been logged in (but she refuses to believe it :D). Sue
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Reviewed By: saiyanchick On: November 23, 2003 03:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i looove this fic it's one of the best I've ever read. I'm soo looking foward to anything you may right in the future,and good luck i hope you win.
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Reviewed By: Angelwendy On: November 20, 2003 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loooooved this fic. It was so sweet. Slightly uncharacteristic of vegeta (only slightly which is the best way to do it) but who cares, it's still awesome. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl ( I am logged in really, bu MM refuses to believe it) On: November 19, 2003 06:13 EST
Comment/Review:
Excellent job!! A beautifully worded touching story. Thank you for sharing it with us... :D
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - not logged in On: November 18, 2003 21:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have loved this fic since the first time I read it. Fabulous job portraying Vegeta as "sweet" but still keeping him in character. This is a very emotional, well thought out, well-written story. You should be very proud of it!
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Title: Great one!!!!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 16:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He there BS!!! Like I said in the forum, I loved your ficcy!!!! Keep up the great work! ^_^ ~Blue Dragon~
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: November 17, 2003 21:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ONNA!!! I LOVED THIS STORYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!! OH YES I DID IT WAS SOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!! KEEP WRITING HON! LATER!!!
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Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it. You have good technical skills, and you weave a story well. You draw the reader in and make them care about what is happening. Well done!
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: November 17, 2003 15:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to say again how much I enjoyed your fic! Vegeta's a tough POV to write and you did a good job capturing his character. My favorite parts are actually the present time. They are so sweet, but still in character.
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Reviewed By: Kat167 On: November 17, 2003 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. And the kiss at the end was so sweet. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 11:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! I could just see Bra dragging Vegeta off to go pick out his clothes. :) Great job.
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Title: Great fic!
Reviewed By: AM On: November 17, 2003 10:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read it when you first put it up! You did a really great job of it! ummm looks at post... AHH thats right Its the Greatest thing I ever read!! ^_^ O.~
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