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| "The Arrangement" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 23:21 CDT
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As usual, you've provided a beautiful fic that's packed ful of adventure, angst, humor, and steamy gundam pilot action. No matter what pairs you choose, they always make perfect sense. This fic wouldn't have worked at all if it had been a Heero/Duo story. I was on the edge of my chair through so much of it, and there were numerous times that found me yelling at my monitor - as if that would really change anything. ;) The bed shopping was so cute - I can just imagine Heero losing his concentration as he watched Wufei "test drive" the bed! O_o The very last chapter was so sweet and tender. I hope that the boys will continue to let their relationship grow into something healthy and lasting. This life has been rather rough for them and they more than deserve some happiness. Fantastic job kiddo!
| Reviewed By: joy_animefreak On: September 13, 2004 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith (nsi) On: September 12, 2004 17:47 CDT
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A very sweet, very touching end. I bow to you.
| Reviewed By: Yira On: September 12, 2004 16:07 CDT
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It's over.. T_____T It was such a good read while it lasted. I enjoyed this story more than I could express. I will say, I loved the ending. Having Heero talk like that.. I was amused. XD He asked the question, but I doubt that Wufei heard him. *giggle* So cute, so great. I'll be watching out for your next story. *waves little flag* I'm definitely a fan of yours! n.n Keep up the excellent writing.
| Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 16:01 CDT
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Wonderful. You certainly kept your promise to keep them in character and not to get too mushy. Even so, the end was so sweet, I nearly bawled. I'm glad Wufei had the courage to make the changes they both wanted but poor Heero couldn't understand. I can see them living happily ever after, mystifying their friends and frightening the neighbors. I hate to see this fic end, although the ending was very satisfying, so if you got the burning urge to write a little about Duo, Trowa and Quatre... or ooh, even Heero and Wufei in say, 20 years... I for one will be a very happy camper.
| Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: efka On: September 12, 2004 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sad it's over. But the ending was perfect^^ That's one of the best fics I have ever read, certainly the best 1x5. I'm going to miss it- and the feeling I had every time you updated, especially those last three months(it made my heart beat faster ^^) Thank you for a wonderful story! Keep writing and making us happy^^!
| Reviewed By: kurai008 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 11:38 CDT
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I'll be a good girl and drop a comment XD Your fic is awsome! I don't write reviews ofter 'cause I'm too lazy but I just wanted to say that I've been reading your fics for at least a year and that I don't plan to stop now^^ In fact, I'm now too buzy to read a lot of fics but I always find time to read your stuff when you update^^ Lol you're the only one of my favourite authors that I read right away !! I hope you know that you can be proud of your work^^ A great fan of yours, k008^^
| Reviewed By: Devil1 On: September 12, 2004 00:46 CDT
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The best fic that I read. Congratulations, a lot of that. Thanks for the wonderful fic.
| Reviewed By: stardance On: September 11, 2004 18:34 CDT
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How incredibly sweet!!! The boys are possesive too, aren't they. I'm really going to miss this. It was a wonderful story. Keep wtiting.
| Reviewed By: RedHedLvr(Not signed in) On: September 11, 2004 16:47 CDT
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Thank you so much for this fantastic story! I have loved every word. The ending was perfect, I was worried they wouldn't wind up together. Should have trusted you'd make it all work out for them. Thanks again, and will look forward to your next one!
| Reviewed By: DirtyD On: September 11, 2004 13:38 CDT
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Noooo! *cries* I knew it would end, I knew, but I'm kinda of upset now. This was awesome, its over. I found Heero's pervertness very amusing, whens the sequel exactly? You certainly did the characters to the T, I want to cry. Thanks for the hours of entertainment, no more chapters...
| Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As sorry as I am to see this story end, this is one of the most satifying endings I've seen in a looooooooong time. Just lovely. Just the right balance of the old selves and the new. Loved the bed buying scene. And I just knew there was more to Heero than even he lets on. Thank you, thank you!
| Reviewed By: Droom On: September 04, 2004 15:45 CDT
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*sighs* Awwwww the whole thing with Heero inviting Wufei to stay, with the blanket, was just too cute for words. And to think it all started with Heero going 'Me sexually frustrated, you no bother by feelings, me want hump you.' And Wufei going '...Okay.' Well.. They've come an enormously long way, and that for emomtionally stunted teenage war-veterans. Oh! And how they did NOT have sex at the end of chapter 39! That was perfect! I mean, I've nothing against lemons, quite the opposite really, but, it's only been about sex, and and and, well, the little cuddle was just too cute, an hour after reading it I was purring still. ^^ And the intermission was great too, reading things from Heero's POV was certaintly very different, but also very interesting, well, it was wicked cool. ^^ And very nice to realise it's not just Wufei who's being a bit of an idiot sometimes. :) I loved how Heero didn't deem Quatre capable of help. XD I was a bit sad it's ending, but now there's still the epilogue coming, and the short extension/sequel, so that's going to be wicked, and us loyal fans can always read TA again, and again, and again... Wufei solemnly declaring Heero's cooking tasted like boiled socks and seaweed was just too brilliant, really.
| Reviewed By: Self_Insertion On: September 04, 2004 03:15 CDT
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All through reading this fic, I've had my heart in my throat. Especially when Wufei found his things gone - nearly screamed then. Much scarier than ghost stories. (stardance, I'm with you on the desert island idea, let's get her next Monday!) Heero is so clueless, it's almost unfunny. Almost, I said.
| Reviewed By: stardance On: September 03, 2004 19:21 CDT
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You do realize that after reading this taste of Heero a lot of people will be wanting to kidnap you and place you in a very remote, deserted place where you can concentrate on finishing this and only this... Please say we won't have to wait much longer. Super great work.
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