| "The Arrangement" Reviews/Comments [ 241 ] |
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 08:24 CDT
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I LOVED this chapter. What a detailed battle. And yeah, I can see Heero's feelings there, he's got 'em even though he may not realize it. So, bring on the lemon! hee he.
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Title: waiwai
Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: June 23, 2004 23:30 CDT
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You know I lurve you right? ::dies:: I love you but you've got to stop torturing me like this. Even Trowas getting lurved and Wufei just gets exploaded on, and sadified. SAD-IFIED! Why Why Why!!!!! (didja notice that you're getting close to 100 reviews? I think we should have a party when you get 100. And you should celebrate the occassion by posting ....more. >.> Eh heh. Seriously though I promise to keep doing my part towards 100 for you.)
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha! So it's all thanks to the beaucratic woman that they were able to determine who the leaks were. Looks like Heero is starting to be just a tiny bit caring towards Wufei and vice versa.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 10:28 CDT
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Wufei you silly boy, how could you have missed Heero's obvious concern for you! Doesn't matter, Wufei'll soon get the relationship he's pretending he doesn't want. Another great chapter.
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Title: Torture!!!!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 09:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapters, wonderful subtle extending of the ties between our two prickly heros, but what torture that it's so slow and yet so obvious!!! Update soon, please!!
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Title: RedHedLvr
Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 06:21 CDT
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Haven't read the update yet, but my money is on Sam as the mole. The admin/accounting type dweebs are just too easy a mark for that role. I mean come on, just cause we like everything nice and orderly, all the pages of a report facing the proper way with the staple in the upper left corner and IT BETTER BE IN BLACK IN BUDDY OR YOU'LL HAVE TO DO IT AGAIN!!! doesn't mean we are always the bad guys, ya know?? Ahem...*shakes self out of rant mode*. I love it, its edgey, dark in spots and oh so divinely angsty. Keep up the great work here!
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Title: Chapter 26
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:50 CDT
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So it's still not clear who the mole(s) is/are. I still have a niggling feeling about Sam. I hope I'm wrong... I'm surprised we didn't see the other pilot nosing around somewhere! It was interesting how they all met up under slightly different circumstances. Quatre is an amazing friend. I absolutely loved his offering - "Both silence and words are the gifts of friends." That's a gift worth more than something from his wallet. Another great fic, naturally.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn. What a sucky way to have your secret sex life come out. How the hell did all these holes get in the Preventor security?
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: June 21, 2004 14:12 CDT
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I admire so your plotting and the delicate way you reveal the characters. I suspected from the beginning that Heero cared for WuFei a lot more than Wufei knew. I hope I'm right. As for the "other" plot, the Syndicate : I'm begining to suspect everyone, Dear Althea, Sam, ...Duo... Have I mentioned lately how much I love this fic?
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith (not signed in) On: June 21, 2004 11:28 CDT
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There are some stories I wish I could reread all over again for the first time. Yours is one of them.
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Title: Me again!!
Reviewed By: Talyssa_ On: June 19, 2004 03:39 CDT
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This recent partial chapter was almost like a birthday present! At least, I didn't see it posted until my birthday. Except I waited until today to read it on the off chance that the next oh, four or five parts would be posted too and I could read them all together. and then I got impatient. So, wow. Plot twist. I was wondering what happened to Trowa, he obviously wasn't getting any sex so he had to have been busy elsewhere, right? sooooo its been 3 days now. ::prod:: ::prodprodprodpoke:: ::whiiiiiiiiiiiine:: Actually since I started reading this fic I've developed a huge craving for in character non-AU (as in the kind where everyone is a firefighter or magical fairie princess, not this kind) wufei/heero ficcage. I went mad searching before I realized that, oh yes, there isn't a whole lot of that availiable. ::cries:: And you spent all that time mumbling about bokken but what about shinai!!! They're fun too.....although maybe more dangerous because if they splinter or break its very very bad. ::chews on the fic sadly:: its been three days you know. Did I mention its been three days?
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 06:40 CDT
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I'm dying to know what will happen next. At first when I read that Heero surrendered I thought that maybe he didn't want to risk Wufei's life, but damn, it turned out that wasn't it at all, he put down his gun because it was Trowa. I'm intensely curious about what Trowa is up to. The way you described him, sounds like he's gone off the deep end, though of course we all know he's just working undercover. I wonder why Wufei was so restless at the beginning. Hmm... I've been thinking about it but can't work out why. I hadn't expected you to update so quickly so it was a real treat to find out that you'd updated. Neway, great chapter, can't wait until the next part comes out.
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Title: RedHedLvr
Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 06:37 CDT
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Please, oh please! Want a nasty lemon!!
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Title: RedHedLvr
Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 14:00 CDT
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Forgot an important little something. THANK YOU for not making us wait at the end of any nasty clifhangers! I love long chapters. Give the story some meat.
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Title: RedHedLvr
Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its been a long time since I've enjoyed a story as much as this one! And that includes "official" published fiction. You have just the right blend of action, angst, sensuality and humor that makes me wish I wasn't coming to the end of what you have posted so far. I have actually laughed out loud and gotten strange looks from my kids. Bah, what do they know anyway. I can't wait to read more and believe me, I will read your other stories as well. Thanks, and keep 'em rollin', we love it!!
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