| "Another World, Another Love" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: Salena On: March 22, 2004 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very good i really enjoy reading your story please write more soon!!im DYING to know what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: KuramasBlueGirl On: March 20, 2004 23:38 CST
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woooot you updated coolio end cant wait till the next chapter thanks for the great read
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Reviewed By: Reze On: March 20, 2004 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.............ABOUT TIME!!!!!!....you FINALLY updated!.No, you did say that you wanted 8 reviews didn't you? Well,anyway I just wanted to say that I love this chapter as well asthe rest of your fics,please update,AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good, very original!
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Reviewed By: Pocky-chan On: March 20, 2004 01:22 CST
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^_^ I lub your story! Yes why do teachers pressure us 'young people' before we have fun? Oh well...I live in Arizona as well...and it's hot here..
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Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny [not signed in] On: March 19, 2004 23:18 CST
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evil! (And have fun at arizona? if im correct ^-^) update a.s.a.p or else!
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Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 02:18 CST
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o0 o0 o0! nice fic! update soon
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Reviewed By: Reze On: March 13, 2004 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to update? well.. I can't wait until you do!
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Reviewed By: Cute_devil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 08:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your story please update as soon as possible!!!! ^_~
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Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: Corisu Li [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Not bad. It's pretty well-written, and quite fun to read (especially the Jaken-bashing and the Sano-clobbering! ^^) Just a few things. The name of the police chief is 'Saitoh', not 'Sito'. I was seriously staring at the screen like... "Who is THAT?!?!" And one more thing... do Sango and Kagome not WANT to go back? Only they seem pretty content to stay in the Meiji... so are they both thinking of living there? Do they miss their homes? Families? ^___^ Aaaaand... some of the characters are kind of excess. If you bring in characters just to bring them in, you'll start to forget about them, or your entire style may start to go downhill... I apologize if I'm criticizing too much, but this fic has the potential to be quite good if you make sure that you fill in all of the loose ends. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Inari-foxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!!!!!! YOU UPDATED! I AM SO HAPPY!! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!!!!!!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Flame03 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 04:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter keep on writting
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Reviewed By: KuramasBlueGirl On: February 27, 2004 20:18 CST
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YAYAY last one ok , let see oh yeah i cant wait till you write your other cross oovers cause i am really enjoying your story you have right now so im really excited :-) ok well theres my four
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Reviewed By: KuramasBlueGirl On: February 27, 2004 20:17 CST
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third comment one more to go ;) so anyway i was just thinking are you going to pair up maso and sano together? that would be cute
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Reviewed By: KuramasBlueGirl On: February 27, 2004 20:15 CST
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so yeah i really enjoyed your chapter, i cant wait till kenshin and kagome finally get to gether as well as sango and asohi.
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