| "The Princess Bride" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 17:57 CST
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Yay! It's gettin' to the juicy parts ^_^ Only a few more chappies left...
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Reviewed By: Lady kagome1 On: March 21, 2004 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its OK,but its..i cant put my finger on it.. *shrugs* i dont get it kagome lets kouga take her and inuyasha is being tortured by some 'machine'?!?! -__- well there better be a good ending and fix the spelling and your writing dont jump to conclusions quickly not to mention short chapters.
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Title: The Princess Bride
Reviewed By: FireGodess22 On: March 21, 2004 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the original story but this is better. Poor InuYasha!! That's really gotta hurt. I can't believe you got almost all the characters in there, even Jaken! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 21:58 CST
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OMG ehehehehe... lmao I've been laughing for the past half hour!! Oh, god!!! Miroku being Inigo... Inuyasha being Westley, Naraku being Vizinni... oh, it's just too much! *sidesplitting laughter moment* LOL Keep up the good work!!! Can't wait to see who plays the albino... And oh, Koga as Prince Humperdinck! *bursts out laughing and falls off chair* hahaha...
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Title: I will find a better reason I will find a better reason I will find a better reason
Reviewed By: this is InuYasha loves me On: March 12, 2004 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great work once again!!! me claps for you a lot...well up dat soon real soon!!!
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Title: great work!
Reviewed By: rachel-new.bday.girl On: March 10, 2004 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're a really great writer! i love your idea for making the princess bride into and inuyasha fanfic. you've done a really good job keeping things somewhat the same and yet with the whole inuyasha cast! ^_^ keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: me On: March 09, 2004 18:30 CST
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omg, if you don't continue this story soon, i'll hunt you down and you will be stampeded by rampaging emu's. i luv it, u r an awesome story writer, way better than me!!!!!i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv iti luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it i luv it.
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 22:02 CST
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Ilove it but but.........*is seen crying* YOU GOT RID OF HIS ABSOLLUTLY CUTE DOGGY EARS why why why oh iloved those ears *breaks into sob* they are so cute and fluffy and and Why why why *straigitins herself out but still sniffling over the ears* Otherwise i love it
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Title: heheheheheheheehehe...and oh yea...there is a use to titles...to write hehehehehe in
Reviewed By: ok this is InuYasha loves me...and yes i am to lazy to log in On: March 08, 2004 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well...you have done it...the romance scene sold me...I LOVE THIS STORY BETTER THAN THE ORGINAL PRINCESS BRIDE!!!!!!!!!!! You have done it...the way Naraku died..THANK YOU...you even made him seem like an idoit when he died...and the Kag/Inu fighting like that...so funny...even more so when you know that they are...well...in love and don't know who the other person they just sent of the cliff is...and the fact he yelled MORON!! that was beautiful...and the love scene...I read lemons so to me it wasn't even limey...but very good...!!!!! And the fact that you ventured away from the movie a little and had them...as you put it...make love...!!! GOOOD IDEA...I hope you like this...i seem to be the only one to review every day and chappie...wel UP DATE SOON...i know theres more...(i watched the movie ^_^) bye
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Title: I have found a use!!!!!! To write in them...not a good one but a use
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me not logged in sorry On: March 07, 2004 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok her we go!!!! I have to say it...the sesshi part has nearly got me convienced...I love it!!!!! every little bit...I think I'll have to see how Inu and Kag reunit to tell what is better (movie/this) but as of now there is a very fine line...your so close!!! i hope for the next chappie soon very soon!!!! UP DATE
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Title: If I ever find a purpose for writing a title I'll tell you
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok your very close i think I'm staring to like this verson of the princess bride more than the old one....but...there is still a few things off...I LOVE the Miroku and InuYasha LOVE scene stuff very funny!!!!!!! It had me laughing my ass off...the very thought....but anyway...very good great fabulous and a lot of other words I'm to lazy to type...lol...keep up the terific work and you will in no time make me love it more than the origanal....!!!!!! and by the way UP DATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv the princess bride it a great moive and i love this story!I can't wait to see the fight scene plz review soon!!!!
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Title: I WILL FIND A PURPOSE TO WRITING A TITLE I WILL!!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuYasha loves me [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes differnet is very good and I like the line you put in for miroku...it was a little long and drawn out but good no the less!!!!! And his past that you have set up!!!!! that was good really good...I mean great wonderful fabulous!!! I can't think of nay more words...but it is wonderful...i believe that you have something good going...and if you stop...i my have to inflict bodily harm...^_^ so don't...it is very close...but I still like the movie better...and I just wanted to say one thing...i love how you are doing InuYasha's personality..!!!!!!!! It is brillant...and I can't wait to see how you will be doing the scene where naraku/the other funny guy in the movie that i can't remember his name ever...death scene...will you use the poison or will they fight...ohhhh I can't wait!!!!!
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Title: HEY!
Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!! I wanna know whats next! *Pouts* But i really like it! I really dont know why no one else reviews! You have more then like 100 visits, ppl should review!! But plz continue!! i love it! ur on my favs.
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 12:24 CST
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Oooh! Is Miroku gonna get a catch phrase that he says over and over and over??? He he he. J/K. And now the fun parts begin! ^_^
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