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Title: tessie
Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 08:02 PDT
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awsome story. but you havn't update for a long time! did you aboned this story? tessie
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Title: another terrific story
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 23:15 PDT
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Goodness, I hope you haven't abandoned this story--you've got a terrific premise, and your writing and characterizations are up to your usual high standard. Loved everything about this, but especially the stuff in chapters 3 & 4 from Miroku's point-of-view, about his Kazaana. Powerful stuff. Also, this: "It was amazing how tired she was for someone who'd spent most of the day being carried around by men of varying demonic ancestry, " as a good example of the wit you manage to lace your jeopardies with. I do hope you decide to continue this story. I'd love to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I've been freeloading for the last several chapters, not leaving a review as I should. I'd say I'm just insanely busy, but I really have no excuse. As a fanfic author, I know how much reviews mean to me, and in my opinion, you are veeerrry deserving of more reviews than what you have received thus far! Well, from now on, I'll kick in my fair share! I enjoy the angst that you have created, and I really feel for poor Kagome after this last chapter! I can't wait to see what she does with all of her guilt and, now, Sango's heart-wrenching request. Happy Holidays!
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Reviewed By: Shippo Gene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 21:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! what a long chapter! your fic is really good! you have a very good writing style. good job!
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Title: faerie
Reviewed By: faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 18:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic caught my attention from the first sentence. I can't wait to read what happens next. The atmosphere is so awesome!!!
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Reviewed By: Demonchic-K [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 13:09 PST
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You have gotta continue this fic, it ROCKS!!! Love it-Have a Merrry Christmas.
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Reviewed By: rentfairy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 00:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it! very suspensful, and i like your descriptions. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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