| "Whispered Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 261 ] |
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Title: *glares*
Reviewed By: Corin.....and Koda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Corin: MEANIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU LEFT IT HANGING!!!! HOW DARE THEE!!!! I SHALL SMITE THEE!!! *gets a plastic sword and tries to look threatening....and failing* Koda(my muse): Corin...they ain't buying it...just put the toy down and step away from it. Corin: *pouts* not coolie *puts the sword and and goes to her corner to cry* Koda: anyways...loved the story can't wait for you to update ^^
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Reviewed By: lil_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 23:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! I'm just reviewing again in attempt for a favor. Just want to know if it's possible if you can email me when you update your story. (lil_angel_178@yahoo.ca)
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Reviewed By: COLORS NEVER MATTER On: July 20, 2004 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HA! ILL PROBULY GO INSAIN FROM THE WAIT BEFOR THE CHAPTER COMES OUT LOL JUST KIDDIN'! i love this story its so interestin! im sick and tired of reading storys about kagome getting captured or mettin rin then metting sesshmaru good luck on the next chapter cant wait for it!!! FOX!!!!!!!!!!!OR ALSO KNOWN AS COLORS NEVER MATTER!
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Reviewed By: Allison On: July 20, 2004 14:39 EDT
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YOU MEAN PERSON!!!!!!! I CAN NOT BELIEVE THAT YOU WOULD JUST CUT OFF RIGHT THERE!!!!!!!!!!! Pretty cunning......update ok?
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Reviewed By: Maru-Mai On: July 17, 2004 21:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Snap yo! You have to update soon. That is one evil cliff hanger. is the sword really going to work on Kagome? How can it, do the imp messengers still circle around her body, even after shes been dead for so long? And if it doesn't work, will Sesshomaru become guilty (Because he got her hopes up, not to metion his own, of her being able to be reserected) and embarresed? Please update soon, I'm literally on the edge of my seat! (Its rather uncomfortable actually, lol) Good luck!
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Reviewed By: DarknessGuardian On: July 14, 2004 06:03 EDT
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...sniff sniff.... its was sooooo cool!!Rin!!!!! (HECK YEAH) Sesshy got tenseiga... heheheh!kikyou (grrr) aghh MY HEAD DOESNT HURT ThANKS TO THOSE CHAPTERS thankyouthsnkyiuthsnkyou.. ughh arigato... and GOMEN TIMES A ZILLION FO RNOT BEING ABLE TO REVEIW OR RATHER CONGRATULATE YOU ON YOUR FANTASTIC WORK!!!!! andfornotbringabletofindthebakawhoreportedyou!!! ::SNIFF:: well... please excuse my absense in the future (summer job ack X.x) i cant wait to see the other chapters!!!!! ..uhuh OHH YEAH sayonara.. hope i spell it right!!!!!! heh heh
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Reviewed By: Miyumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 06:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wahh.. whata clif hanger that's not fair!!!!! *Sob* Oh my god I can't wait for the next chappie!!! She's comming to life!!! Yayyyy!!! For the sake of your loyal readers update soon!!! ~Miyumi
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Title: nnnooo please continue
Reviewed By: guerro On: July 11, 2004 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update it i beg of u please i want to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: Darkmiko_13 On: July 11, 2004 16:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 04:19 EDT
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Even if it was EVIL to leave it there at that cliffie, it was a good stopping point. I know it isn't going to work. Cause she is a GHOST and not a spirt above a body. In order for it to work she must have a body and be dying. Namely the only way it will work is, if it is on a full moon night, and she is mortally wounded. Otherwise since she hasn't a body. And the grim reapers aren't around and she is not a coporal form, she cannot be brought back to life. So how long will it take for Sessy to realize this? Can he mortally wound her? What about Naraku I know he is up to something. She is a physical being on the full moon. Does that not mean that the Shikon no Tama is as well? And that since it in a coporal form, does that not mean it can be taken off of her? And if it is so does that mean she dissapears into the Shikon or that her ghost form will be the only form left? Where is Naraku? How was he created if not by the normal means of Onigumo and his lust for Kikyo? Great story. Keep up the excellente work.
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Title: Awwwwwww
Reviewed By: Amber/Angel On: July 10, 2004 13:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such an awesome chapter!! I love the way you write. Please continue soon I can't wait to read more.
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Title: Update soon!
Reviewed By: Katrinalove On: July 10, 2004 11:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Everything is well done~! Since you left it off on a cliffy, could you update sooner? I know you have a life and all, who doesn't? (not meanting names...=0#..coff coff... me...coff coff... Cor~) anywhos...I hope you8 update soon. Great job! YOu have a gift of writing...I'm just glad you took it to anime fanfics! ttyl. byez. -Katrinalove
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Reviewed By: MutelyMe22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 02:15 EDT
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NOOOOOOO! Not a cliffie! You bring invisible tears to my eyes! And I'm all out of invisible kleenex! Oh well Update soon! Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer (too lazy to login) On: July 10, 2004 02:09 EDT
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YAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!! youkai yume is not dead after all!!!!!!but SHE IS EVIL!!!!!!!!! EVIL I TELL YOU!!!!!! I HATE CLIFFYS!!!!!!!! I HATE HATE HATE HATE EVIL CLIFFYS!!!!!!!! ok evil cliffys arent that bad they make me want to read more but I am such an imapationt person.....I NEED MORE!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASELEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PPPPPPLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE UPDATE VEARY VEARY VEARY VEARY VEARY VEARY VEARY VEAY VEARY VEARY SSSSOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: darknessflame66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o w-why?....ToT WHY DID U LEAVE IT AT AN CLIFFY?!?!?!?!? AT THE MOST WORST PART TO END!!! IT WAS GETTING SOO GOOD TOOO!!!! SOOO GOOD THAT I WAS HOLDING MY BREATH AT THE END SEEING IF IT WOULD WORK!!!!! BUT U ENDED IT!!!! T-T it made me sad.... PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO DO IF IT WORKED!!!!!!!!!!! please tell me it worked......
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