| "Whispered Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 261 ] |
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 04:19 EDT
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Even if it was EVIL to leave it there at that cliffie, it was a good stopping point. I know it isn't going to work. Cause she is a GHOST and not a spirt above a body. In order for it to work she must have a body and be dying. Namely the only way it will work is, if it is on a full moon night, and she is mortally wounded. Otherwise since she hasn't a body. And the grim reapers aren't around and she is not a coporal form, she cannot be brought back to life. So how long will it take for Sessy to realize this? Can he mortally wound her? What about Naraku I know he is up to something. She is a physical being on the full moon. Does that not mean that the Shikon no Tama is as well? And that since it in a coporal form, does that not mean it can be taken off of her? And if it is so does that mean she dissapears into the Shikon or that her ghost form will be the only form left? Where is Naraku? How was he created if not by the normal means of Onigumo and his lust for Kikyo? Great story. Keep up the excellente work.
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Title: Awwwwwww
Reviewed By: Amber/Angel On: July 10, 2004 13:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such an awesome chapter!! I love the way you write. Please continue soon I can't wait to read more.
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Title: Update soon!
Reviewed By: Katrinalove On: July 10, 2004 11:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Everything is well done~! Since you left it off on a cliffy, could you update sooner? I know you have a life and all, who doesn't? (not meanting names...=0#..coff coff... me...coff coff... Cor~) anywhos...I hope you8 update soon. Great job! YOu have a gift of writing...I'm just glad you took it to anime fanfics! ttyl. byez. -Katrinalove
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Reviewed By: MutelyMe22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 02:15 EDT
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NOOOOOOO! Not a cliffie! You bring invisible tears to my eyes! And I'm all out of invisible kleenex! Oh well Update soon! Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer (too lazy to login) On: July 10, 2004 02:09 EDT
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YAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!! youkai yume is not dead after all!!!!!!but SHE IS EVIL!!!!!!!!! EVIL I TELL YOU!!!!!! I HATE CLIFFYS!!!!!!!! I HATE HATE HATE HATE EVIL CLIFFYS!!!!!!!! ok evil cliffys arent that bad they make me want to read more but I am such an imapationt person.....I NEED MORE!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASELEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PPPPPPLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE UPDATE VEARY VEARY VEARY VEARY VEARY VEARY VEARY VEAY VEARY VEARY SSSSOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: darknessflame66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o w-why?....ToT WHY DID U LEAVE IT AT AN CLIFFY?!?!?!?!? AT THE MOST WORST PART TO END!!! IT WAS GETTING SOO GOOD TOOO!!!! SOOO GOOD THAT I WAS HOLDING MY BREATH AT THE END SEEING IF IT WOULD WORK!!!!! BUT U ENDED IT!!!! T-T it made me sad.... PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO DO IF IT WORKED!!!!!!!!!!! please tell me it worked......
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Reviewed By: Amethyst *ish not in* On: July 09, 2004 23:58 EDT
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=D Take your time on the next chapter. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon22000(not loged in) On: July 09, 2004 21:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEEEEVVVVVVVIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YA END IT THERE!!!!! PLz UPDATE ASAP OK plZ plZ PLZ!!!!!!!!
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Title: UpDaTe!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness (not logged in) On: July 09, 2004 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gasp* THAT WAS A HORRIBLE CLIFFY!! *pretends to faint* Will Kagome come back to life?! Will she?! I must find out!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! IF YOU DON'T, I'LL GO CRAZY!! I DON'T WANNA GO CRAZY!!! ~Sesshy: That would be implying that you are not already insane, woman.~ *glare*....Shush. BUT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'VE BEEN WAITING SO LONG TO SEE IF KAGOME WOULD BE BROUGHT BACK TO LIFE!! Pleaaaaaaase update!!!!! ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)-meow
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Title: =(
Reviewed By: KawaiiMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 03:05 EDT
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It's been awhile since you've updated this! When are you going to? I hope it's soon! I really like it! And also, update Love Life too! ^_^
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Reviewed By: hjhjfhdjahuf On: June 23, 2004 01:27 EDT
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hey I just saw yumes bio...it said that her last visit to mm.org was june 15 so you are here!..... your just not updateing.... WHY?!?!?!?!?!? WHY HAVE YOU BETRAYED US YUME?!?!?!*crys uncontrolably* you see I dont have a real life...all I realy do is read fan fic....and all the good authors have betrayed me!!! once agian I'll say WHY!!!!??????
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 18:37 EDT
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hello....any body home? will this ever be updated? I hope so....BEACAS I LOVE THIS FIC
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Reviewed By: wowies On: June 13, 2004 10:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
good
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 06:17 EDT
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAY! I havent read a fic that good in such a long time!!! I love ths fic!!! I wonder wat will happen when sesonaru fineds out about tenseiga *wink* *wink* aaaany ways ME WANT UPDATES!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE !!!!!!!!! AND SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON YAY!!!!!!
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Title: whispered dreams
Reviewed By: fairywings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 19:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I Love your story! Please update soon! Oh I can't wait to read what happens next! Thank you!
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