| "Kagome! Where are you?!" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 14:45 PST
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NONONONONONONONONO Kagome was NOT raped. Please? It would suck if she were raped and the story doesn't need that kind of drama... it's perfect the way it is. Giligan's Island!!!! COOL!! Marianne and Ginger are Cool! YAY! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow's Light On: March 25, 2004 13:22 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best written stories that I have ever read. At the end of World with no magic part 4 you say that you limit yourself to 25000 words per world. There is no need to do that. I would be happy if you wrote all you wanted. Except that torture part was a little harsh. I'm kind of an idealism person.
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Reviewed By: Blood_lust_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 23:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh didn't see that one coming. Very good idea putting the Lord Of The Rings in this. Very origanal idea. How do you come up with the ideas for the worlds? Its amazing and very intertaining good job.
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Reviewed By: BRL On: March 24, 2004 20:12 PST
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OOHH! Gilligan's Island, is it? Very, VERY unexpected! excellent plot twist! Very good; very satisfying. Thanks! ~ Black Rose Lady~
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Reviewed By: edh On: March 24, 2004 18:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooh, yes. gillagin'a isle. lol. cant vait 2 c ze chaos from zat 1. hurry up and update alvite? ja! ~~*~~*EMERALD-
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 16:10 PST
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AMAZING CHAPTER! For your longer idea, i can't imagine Kag's grandfather gone james bond style! Ah i though i do like the way you put it. You know, the major running away thing and so on and so forth. Very good! Also i can't beleive you'rethrowing them on 'that' island! Omigosh this is going to be great!
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Reviewed By: Blood_lust_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 22:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love this story. Its so funny. I never thought I'd see the day that Sesshomaru had to do simple addition to control his feelings or even need to do simpl addition.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 12:10 PST
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I feel so inferior compared to your writing. :( YOU'RE JUST SO GOOD!
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 16:16 PST
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"Aerial photos show a small fire here." The colonel points to one of the maps. "Our friends, the guerillas, know that we will spot it. SO, it's obviously a trap. They want us to enter that forest, where they'll ambush us." Wow, those Nazis are so smart. Not. LOL...those idiots. And...Sesshoumaru gets raped? Interesting...
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 21:22 PST
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they better not fu** him...i'll never forgive you!!! please, please, please, please don't let them rape him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait until your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: emerald dragon hanyou On: March 21, 2004 20:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yuor evil. ~~*~~*EMERALD-
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Title: *My computer won't let me log in -_-;
Reviewed By: Chipmunk_knumpihC* On: March 21, 2004 19:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cannot believe you left it there! You are truly evil dude. I hope you get more chapters up soon this is a really great story and really hillarious at points. And please don't listen to Kiamia, I like the story how it is and you can portray Fluffy anyway you want to. Your story still rocks. I think this story is the best and if she doesn't agree then she's a bit slow, it is after all a Fan Fiction. The characters don't have to be perfect matches of the show or the manga. -Hands Jeffs the Evil Muffin of Doom *Dun Dun Dun* and dances until she's again dragged off-
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Reviewed By: aymi On: March 21, 2004 13:46 PST
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grossness!!!you better not let sesshie get raped...i would hate you foreva!!!Kagome is a different story...i really dont care what hapens to her as long as my sesshie baby is ok!!!
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Reviewed By: KikyoKiller [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 12:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! That's really nasty! Poor Sesshoumaru. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! ~KikyoKiller~
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Reviewed By: 12blue12(logged off) On: March 21, 2004 11:29 PST
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holy crap intense yet funny but the ending is well not wat i imagined so as an ending thought fluffers beta kick their assesgot that! well plz update soon cya!
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