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Reviewed By: ~Frost~bite~ On: December 21, 2003 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u should really continue i got what u did at the end but make it a little less confusing other than that it was great.
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Reviewed By: wildgirl4560 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great!!! i like it alot u should keep going but am a little confused at the end kaedes hut but keep going i cant wait for the nexts chapter
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good lemon and all, but the rest of it was a little harder to understand. You might want to re-read it yourself and make some revisions. :) (Not a flame)
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Reviewed By: TwiztidJuggalette [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's such a great story, I can't wipe the grin off my face, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ashra Ab [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 11:31 CST
Comment/Review:
you MUST continue!!!!!
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Title: Drean Walking
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 00:51 CST
Comment/Review:
well i hope you do continue it cause of how you left it...very nice....i really liked it...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(not signed in) On: November 22, 2003 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay it was great but one thing that i just dont get in the end at kaede's hut i dont get but the rest was good e-mail me at cutie_pie_2101_1012@yahoo.com when u update
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Reviewed By: Mitsue-chan On: November 22, 2003 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved it!!!! So original, you MUST continue ASAP. Your fics are always wonderful, you're a great writer.
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 23:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I personally thought that the fic was really cute and that you should continue it. Question though! At the end, when you return to Kaede's hut, where are Kagome and Inuyasha and what is happening exactly. I just got a little confused there at the end, but other than that I think you should continue!
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