| "A Twist, A spice" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: haruko_haraharu
Reviewed By: haruko_haraharu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
heeeheeee i like it woohoo and yes it is a little different but i like thef act the kenshin is a litle more agressive, in the anime he was not kaoru was more aggresive so this made me happy so continue, but your style of writing was a little weird cause at the begining i couldent figure out how she slide to the floor and fell asleep, anyway it was lonely (hell i'd like to be kissed by kenshin (drull))
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Reviewed By: koneko12 On: December 09, 2003 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it so far. Please continue to update I cant wait till you post!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: arch_angel_86 On: December 06, 2003 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEy, ur doing a great job. I love that kenshin is not all goody -goody and karou doesn't look completely weak...update soon...plz
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Reviewed By: tsukix33 On: November 27, 2003 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is good so far! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Killer Of Love04 On: November 25, 2003 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good so far i hope u will keep going and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: shadowgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luved it so far. hope u updates soon.
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Reviewed By: koneko12 On: November 23, 2003 15:10 CST
Comment/Review:
it sounds good so far keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Fairlight On: November 22, 2003 23:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Like your story so far and hope you write more soon.
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