| "A Twist, A spice" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Faith2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this storie!! Keep up the great work!
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Title: um ok this title is title
Reviewed By: ana-chan On: December 29, 2003 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i...love...you your so good your so go good, just keep going just keep going, and tell me when you post chapter 7 hurray!!!! anyway,, oh yes please please please make the chappers longer cause i read really fast and i like finished this one in 7 minutes.... yah but i still love you yay!!! :D
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Title: *sesshylover
Reviewed By: sesshylover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 07:10 CST
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Love your story and your new chapter..... but its a little confusing. I thought you ended when they were outside and she told him he can't but the new one looks like a conitinuation (SP?) of an earlier chapter. I'm confused. Oh yeah, and i loved the lemon!
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Reviewed By: sesshylover* On: December 22, 2003 11:50 CST
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I just want to say that i love your story!! I never wrote a review i think but i started reading it when you first put it up. I;ve been hooked on your story ever since.
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Title: damn it hurry
Reviewed By: haruko_haraharu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 15:28 CST
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i love this to death but if you take anylonger to write your new chapter then i might go crazy please hurry up, please ( im crying now ) ive been waiting for an update sence like... 2 weeks to 3 weeks ago and im on extreme suspence rigth ow so hurry or i'll go crazy ok bye ja ne ot something just huryy please please i'll beg on my hands and knees if it make you write or update soon so come on your the best and i love yout writing i want to read the next chappie so come on please hurry i cant wia tany longer im gonna go crazy. anway i think i have begged anough i willl check in 2 days to see if you updated if not then i'll beg some more anyway ja ne!!! i love you!
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Title: haruko_haraharu
Reviewed By: haruko_haraharu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
make it more...lovey... yah lovey lovey... um yah, anyway do more romance, i mean this is a hentai so make it hentai, heheeee ideas ideas, anyway keep it up your doing gooooooooood, no no gooooooooood excelllent dude ya, oknow im muble and jumbling. whatever bye post chap 4 sooon or i'lll commit sepiku(samuri scuicide)... but not. ja!!! :p &)
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Title: haruko_haraharu
Reviewed By: haruko_haraharu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yayyyyy!!!! im so proud of you you did great and im sorry you got hurt by flames dont worry i will never flame you. you are great love you!!!! ( not in a spooky kinda way like i love your so cool kind of way...just feel honored) :p
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Title: haruko_haraharu
Reviewed By: haruko_haraharu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
heeeheeee i like it woohoo and yes it is a little different but i like thef act the kenshin is a litle more agressive, in the anime he was not kaoru was more aggresive so this made me happy so continue, but your style of writing was a little weird cause at the begining i couldent figure out how she slide to the floor and fell asleep, anyway it was lonely (hell i'd like to be kissed by kenshin (drull))
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Reviewed By: koneko12 On: December 09, 2003 22:31 CST
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I like it so far. Please continue to update I cant wait till you post!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: arch_angel_86 On: December 06, 2003 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEy, ur doing a great job. I love that kenshin is not all goody -goody and karou doesn't look completely weak...update soon...plz
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Reviewed By: tsukix33 On: November 27, 2003 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is good so far! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Killer Of Love04 On: November 25, 2003 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good so far i hope u will keep going and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: shadowgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luved it so far. hope u updates soon.
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Reviewed By: koneko12 On: November 23, 2003 15:10 CST
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it sounds good so far keep updating.
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Reviewed By: Fairlight On: November 22, 2003 23:29 CST
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Like your story so far and hope you write more soon.
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