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| "Queen Megan" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: alert
Reviewed By: Ace_117RA On: March 11, 2005 12:25 CST
Comment/Review:
the last 2 hapters didnt post
| Reviewed By: Erik Almighty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 07:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very creative. This is the first fic I've read and it is great.
| Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: Mirror of Kaguya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Ya know, your idea of Misty's daughter sure is a new and interesting one. ^^ Though, I suggest a couple things. I wonder if the huge, chunky paragraphs are turning people off this fic. Perhaps you could slice it into more well-formed paragraphs, such as not having a conversation in one entire paragraph. How about when a new character speaks, he/she gets a paragraph for him/her alone? This way, it won't be so overwhelming to see so many quotes in one paragraph. And I'd reeeally like to know Grace's story. How about making this into a fic with a separate chapter(s) for her, then Ash and Co. meet her?
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