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| "Courage" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Annayolei On: June 12, 2024 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Frankly I'm astonished by the reviews that have been left and if
not for the timestamps on them, I would think they were written by
bratty Tumblrinas who don't know was tags are. Anyway, your fic did
a great job of illustrating that trauma doesn't immediately heal
when the threat is over. I actually was one on your beta readers a
long time ago at a time when I too was going through my own
recovery and seeing this fic showed me that yes, some shit is
fucked up and it's okay not to be okay about it. Especially when a
second life could possibly be brought into the world to endure
this. Hopefully you aren't anywhere near Twitter these days because
conservative purity culture has plagued but I'm thankful for people
like you that write Dead Dove fics that don't sugarcoat what very
likely would happen in such a scenario.
| Reviewed By: Fruitloop Trooper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 15:28 PST
Comment/Review:
Interesting, but I don't see how D-Reaper could have erased Juri's love for Takato. That's not something that can be easily dismissed like that. Also, what's with the last names? Experimenting with a new style?
| Reviewed By: Locke of the Watch On: December 04, 2003 15:23 PST
Comment/Review:
A Dark fiction indeed. I normaly read your fictinons to just laugh at some of problems that the Digi-Destined/Chosen face in your universes, but your recent Dark fiction spee has made me scared for your mental health. It is okay to write Dark now and then, but if you write serious Dark fictions all the time... it is just not normal for anyone. So, lighten up and enjoy your life, because you only live once (Heh, even I am taking that advice to a degree)!
| Reviewed By: Alan Wilkinson On: November 23, 2003 03:36 PST
Comment/Review:
We've already had a rather long e-mail argument over this story, so I'll simply ask: If juri is a suicidal depressive, what does that make Takato? Besides broken hearted, obviously. BTW, media miner need to work on their system a bit.. "Dear MediaMiner Member, Your favorite author 'Lord Archive', has just updated 'Courage' fanfic. New chapter added to 'Courage'." The fact that this fic is a one-shot obviously escaped it's attention...
| Reviewed By: A Reader On: November 22, 2003 23:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a well written piece of fanfiction. It is typical of your consistently high quality works. While this was very interesting to read and had a suprising ending it was very similar to "Unforgiven" in terms of the angst and feelings of guilt caused by the D-Reaper, only instead of the story focusing on Ruki it focuses on a much more depressed Juri. To be honest, there's only so far you can go with this type of fanfiction. Though it's interesting to read a very dark and edgy piece of fanfiction once in a while you seem to have begun to focus on that type of fiction almost exclusively now. You are a very good writer but to be honest I don't have any particular desire to continue reading stories about children being raped, cutting themselves with knives and committing suicide. I enjoy the stories you write and I think overall that they are great but you need to lighten up just a touch.
| Reviewed By: The Legend of Me [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 19:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The mind of Archive... a dangerous thing. Hmmm... let's see: writing and grammar have inproved, the originality and creativity rating drops to 8 because Juri-angst fics have been done before, but I haven't seen any with her commiting suicide. It was great though!
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