| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 21:46 CST
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I have a feeling that Ryou might just do some castrating after learning what he's just learned. I fear for the safety of his adult housemates. Happy birthday, Dragondreamer! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: January 20, 2004 17:19 CST
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Awwww, tell Dragondreamer I say happy birthday!!!!!^^ *gets hit on the head by a message* oro? ohhhh, right, right. My sis, a bid fan of you and Dragondreamer, says happy birthday and keep up the good work^^
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 20, 2004 11:30 CST
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Wow! Ryou has the ability to be mad! Who knew? That was almost as good as Love My Puppy! *Falls to the floor remembering the spider* Happy Birthday Dragondreamer Yami Dragon!
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 19, 2004 22:50 CST
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wow...go Ryou!!!! *cheers*....awww poor bakura*hugs him leaveing my address in his pocket, whispers: meet me if you have ryou problems* hehehe....MWAHAHAHA!...*cough,cough*...anyway my friend suggest that we round up the evil weasuls and have them kill aku with a spork, this sounded like a great plan but i told her the_great_bakurasgirl had other plans, and might need aku. i liked that chappy, are you going to make a ncs flash back chappy to follow up? poor aten...* hands aten a sword, whispers to aten: use when ye can when thou art old enough to weild it, it slays bad dreams and cuts the costs of a house and mediacal bills in half..Mwahahaha* *runs in the shadows, and ends up hitting a wall* ouch!im ok!...um...unless bakura would like to kiss me to make me better...hehehe...
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Reviewed By: Valea On: January 19, 2004 21:13 CST
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Wow....Ryou going off is quiet a site to see...very good anger since he nver gets angry and he acatully pushed them away...thats a wole lota man *growl* anyway i wanted to say that was pretty good angstafied stuff and i loved the lil bit of fluffiness coming out...too bad that steven is gonann find out....*shudder* or soemthing like that? gahh!!! *jumps bakura and marik from behind* muwhahahaahaha!!!! feel the angry wrath!!! *bakura go squish under my death grip glomp* ^_^ that was a great stuff man..
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 08:55 CST
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Poor lil Ryou-kins. Frightends even me when he's angry. *holds knife evily* The squirrels did it... they are plotting something sinister!..... Happy B-day DragonDreamer(that's her name, right?)
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Reviewed By: bakachibi_voidfox On: January 18, 2004 16:07 CST
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that was squee tastic...my friend said angst ment fear in german....hmmm...*think,think*...any way... that was a good chappy, ryou is soooo trusting, thats a good thing for bakura... do you already know how the story ends? if not i suggest you trap aku in the ultimat place of torture from which he may never escape... anzu's mind...*shivers*
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Reviewed By: Valea On: January 18, 2004 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*slowly plots Aku's demise while trying to get the bread crumbs out my keybaord* Nooo! Bakura!!! remember man come on you can do it! (or else i will make you sit naked around in my computer..muwhahaha) lol anywho poor ryou..the lines have yet to be torn...good stuffing nayway! *praying for happyful updates soon!*
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Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
long time no review sorry. been doing a lot of thing only having time to quickly read. me bad. But the story great so far. Someone need to cut Aku pride and joy off and watch him run around screaming. grins evilly. oh I did come up with some new stories if you every feel like reading some. well see ya around.
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 09:58 CST
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Damn Aku... Oh yeah..um, Great chappie! lol I'll be checking my mail for the next one! Continue soon! Chau! Emily
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 18, 2004 08:42 CST
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And now, only Seto and Joey have are perfectly happy! * looks horrified and slaps a hand on her mouth* I didn't cay that! * runs over to Seto and clings to his leg, completely ignoring a bewildered Joey*
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 08:41 CST
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Hmm... interesting chapters eh? Yay to happiness and darkness and evil little squirells who tap on your windows at night and feed off of your decaying body... wait that's vultures. Same thing! ^_^ Happiness!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 18, 2004 08:37 CST
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Ow..... I don't care if Aku's the bringer of hot, egyptian, yami's... he's just.... wrong....:( When are you updating?!?!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 16, 2004 23:36 CST
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Now that I've gotten over the shock of the best chapter... ever.... in the history of fanfics... I Want My Baki Back! *Whacks him over the head and drags him back to her wall.* Ahh.... that's MUCH better... :)
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gahhhhhh *drools* CHOCOLATE! Chocolate+Ryou=Annnnggg! (sexy word) I was loving it, bloodlusty insane, it was soo great! i really want chocolate now though...but yeah, man, gootta watch out for that blood dont we? *runs the image of the chocolate covered couple again and again and AGAIN in my mind* Sweeeet...literally!poor Malik...and the kids...what will they do? after seeing their daddy all evil-a-fied?! nooooo!! *whimper* but then i feel specail because im cute! *feels specail* MUWHAHAHAAH! *tackles* squeEEEE!!!!!Is that all I wanted to say? I wish I could have read this before schoolso then i would have been the first to review! Power to the people!!!!!!!Power to the bloodlust*does happy dance*
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