| "Hostile Takeover" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo. bad Yami. why you leave us there. @.@ gives a Jas pushie. that for reading Star child. chibi Jas feel so loved.
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Reviewed By: Tokyo Nights [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 22:56 CDT
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*Laughs insanly* Fire, fire fire fire!! *cough cough* Ahem, sorry, lately I've been in a pyro/psycho kind of mood. It's a good chapter... I wonder if any one bleeds.. hehehe
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Reviewed By: Tpkyo Nights [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 22:56 CDT
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*Laughs insanly* Fire, fire fire fire!! *cough cough* Ahem, sorry, lately I've been in a pyro/psycho kind of mood. It's a good chapter... I wonder if any one bleeds.. hehehe
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: April 09, 2004 01:51 CDT
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Yami is such a frickin bastard! Great so far, I LOVE the little Latin part and Aria beating Yami. That sure knocked HIM off his high horse and straight on his royal ass!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 16:38 CDT
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whoot whoot!!!! ARIA IS DA WOMAN!!! *high five* she rocks!!! Yami sucks he lost to a 3 yr old! muwhahahaha, anywho that chapter just kicked ass, and was just espcially funny about Aria sayig ass and only Robbie and Miranda thought it was bad. Priceless.*does dance because theyre all okay!!!* This chapter totally rocked my socks...and now..the dark masked figure has come to the house! wait...chapter 70....*whoops* yay!!!! walrus pride for you life!!! *throws ice cream on the hosue to make the fire go out.* ^_^
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Reviewed By: thunderchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 09:51 CDT
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Hello!This is my first review.This is a great story.I'm not really into the yaoi parts, but other than that this is great.If you need an idea, how about this-the entire family gets to the front door-which is the only open exit.But the fire gets there, so they are trapped.Aten is dying because his heart cannot take so much smoke.Have it so that because of him in a near death situation, he becomes a yami!He uses dark powers to blow the fire away, and changes back before anyone can see what he truly is.Hey, just a thought if you're stuck.Well, update soon!Great story!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 08, 2004 08:50 CDT
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Go Aria! The Friuit of Bakura's loins Can beat the fruit of Marik's loins!!! u_u*...... NOOOO!!!!!..... Ariais trappedandYami'stoblame( I hope!) andIhatesmokedetectors!!! I hope Ryou asks Seth-o what that was all about.... Poor Seth-o!!!!!... Oohhh.... 0_0... Updates in..... 3 days! I can live with that!....I think..... Yeah!!!! Great chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 00:51 CDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! OMG! noo i know this may be a late review so hopefully ill can get a response and like no its nto fair! *prays* BE ALIVE! *shakes* noo...kura....my slave tied up in my computer...i cant believe that...bastards....ROAR!!! I HOPE YOU GET YOURS! *sniffles*...*head falls* i hope heads will roll and people will be gone next chapter...
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 07, 2004 22:53 CDT
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Marik-kun!!!!! That stupid, f*%#$!g Aku!!!!! He made it so I wasn't as mad at the jerk Yami! Oh My God!!!! Updates tomorrow!!!! SQUEEE!!!!!!!! * hugs you tightly* I just wanted to thank you for Carry me Home. That, I hate to say it, may even be better than this! :)
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Reviewed By: Tokyo Nights On: April 06, 2004 19:44 CDT
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I should hope that Steven Bakura's blood is spilled in the next chapter. *crazed blood-lust grin*
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: April 05, 2004 22:29 CDT
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Woah, Aku and Steven are punished? YEAH!! WAHOO! Bedridden for 5 DAYS?!!! I'd have fallen into insanity, I congratulate you on your ability to be bedridden for 5 days and STILL SANE!!At least sane enough to still write.Yami is still being an ass, when will he realize? Realize just what, I don't know. Only you, the almighty writer knows of THAT highly classified knowledge. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!I LOVE Aria in her yami form.
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Reviewed By: Cynicalspiritvalea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 20:40 CDT
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Somehow, i imagine their house wil be destroyed in 70..no to the matter at hand! Yami is so freaking cold! Playign all dirty trying to hurt Aten...*growls* dude what ever happened to having a happy and meryy xmas! YOU WILL GET YOURS!!!! Aria....she's gone! *sniffles* come back to us! grr *goes all insano and sista girl on him* Yami...Steven..Aku ya betta back up cause the gheto valea is going on rampage!!! *gets my shot gun and my walrus and chases them* YOU SHALL PAY!
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Reviewed By: Seto Lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: April 05, 2004 20:15 CDT
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Aten!!!! ARIAAAAAAA!!!!!! NOOOOOO!!!!!... talk about a bad Christmas!!!!! Somebody needs to tell Seth-o!!!!..... AWIA!!!!!!!!!!!......... you're mean.......... and you have Pneumonia!!! Poor you!!!!..... * chains Yami between Marik and Bakura*.... Now you get real entertainment... not those horrible re-runs... :( Here. * shoves a " Nurse Aria, holding.... what we can only hope is medicine" plushie* :) Please get better!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: April 03, 2004 23:56 CST
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Oh no, poor Aten and Marik!! How could Yami ruin CHRISTMAS?!! BASTARD!!*seethes so much she spontaniouysly combusts* Poor you as well, you were bedridden? That sucks. Hope you're all better. Either that or I'm quite insane. BYE!! Sorry if that didn't make sense. The coffe thing was hilarious.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: April 03, 2004 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles*...you forgot my walrus plushie....! *crys* but anyway, the bit in the beginning about like ryou and bakura being nakeed in the library and then they were just like ok was funny...and my god! i want to kill yami! how could you! you power hunrgy bastard! YOUR NOT EVEN TECHINCALLY ALIVE! *curses under breath* please! aten be okay! marik wake up and put the controls back on! eeeek!!! but..besides the evilness...the holidays are so fun..its liek xmas in july!!!!
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