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Reviewed By: Kagome Girl On: May 10, 2004 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKED IT BUT PLEASE HAVE HER WAKE UP I,M CRYING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEAA AAASSSSSSSEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashatotallyobesessed On: May 01, 2004 07:44 CDT
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i was so woryed Kagome was dead(i even deleted your story form my favorites[gomen nasi]i'll ad it back write away!!!) as you sai Sango and Miroku should vist Kagome. but i dont think that Shippo should see Kagome like this. he might be scared that he would loose his new mom. iknow Kags mom forgives Inuyasha but if anything her grampa doesnt. anway great story(Kag is alive yaaay!!!)wonder what Miroku thinks of the nurses outfits *hint hint* JaNe
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Reviewed By: bscl43o On: April 30, 2004 23:55 CDT
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not bad, maybe a little short. some more discription wouldn't hurt. but a good story overall
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Reviewed By: kane-sakura On: February 21, 2004 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually enjoyed this one! I'm looking forward to seeing if she makes it or not!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki*brittany On: February 16, 2004 18:09 CST
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that was a mean cliff hanger! great story so far. keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: sporty_gal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 16:14 CST
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i hate cliff hangers!!!:@:@:@ u have and i mean HAVE to conyinue!!!plz!
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Reviewed By: INUROX! On: December 08, 2003 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I told you lately how good you are at writing, have I told you there's no one else above you...SO WRITE MORE DANGNAMMIT!!
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Reviewed By: princessann [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 00:28 CST
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oh ya what dose 'OOC'mean?? and 'OC'??? i was alwaysed confused
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Title: hey im here again!!
Reviewed By: princessann [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its me again i read the other storys that did'nt have a review plz plz plz plz plz plz continue you are really a goos story tell and i prasie you and update soon ill be waiting and e-mail me if ya wanna be friends and when you update!!................................................................... ................*mumbles* baka dad always leaving home oh well *blabbers bout dad not being home*
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