| "Dark Kidnapper" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: deamon child of death On: December 06, 2003 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT WAS AWESOME PLEASE CONTINUE!!! YOU MUST CONTINUE!!! I NEED TO FINISH READING THE STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU DON'T I'M GOING TO CRY!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 12:01 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a very good fic, don't get discouraged by the lack of reviews. If u think the fic's good, then keep on writing it. That's what I do. Anyway, update soon!
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Reviewed By: FireAngel_Sakura On: December 06, 2003 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is good. But the only bad thing about your story is the grammer.Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: FireAngel_Sakura On: December 06, 2003 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is good. But the only bad thing about your story is the grammer.Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: FireAngel_Sakura On: December 06, 2003 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is good. But the only bad thing about your story is the grammer.Keep up the good work.
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Title: awwww
Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is sooooooo sweat! you have to continue and dont worry about the spelling i cant spell worth a pennie. Bakura: and i should know. Bakka! *hits bakura*
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Title: awwww
Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is sooooooo sweat! you have to continue and dont worry about the spelling i cant spell worth a pennie. Bakura: an i should know. Bakk! *hits bakura*
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Title: *huggles* more fluff!
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 12:21 CST
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Awww sweet *smiles* Jus like ya said in the last chap its the spelling. But hey *pats your back* I think your story is sweet ^__^ AND I want ya to continue. Dun let us wait *huggles* MORE FLUFF SOON!
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Title: to ^___^...from the author
Reviewed By: deep_dementia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 02:35 CST
Comment/Review:
sorry about the grammer!! i can actually write proper english (its my native language), but i cant really be bothered making sure everything is right....sorry if you cant stand improper grammer!! ^__^...thanks to rox for the great reveiw!!
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Reviewed By: ^__^ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 10:42 CST
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Me enjoyed. But like ya said the gram. But dun worry about that to much ^__^ An advise could be that you take a beta-reader (someone who checks your work for ya and gram mistakes) I'd do it for ya if ya like. But ya could ask everyone in your neighborhood. ^__^write more soon
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Reviewed By: rox On: November 24, 2003 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good! ^_^ Love it! ^__^
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