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| "Race of The Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: U. G. On: February 12, 2004 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update asap im looking forward to reading more of this awesome story. Its creative, interesting and i cant wait to read more so update soon please luv y'all JA NE
| Reviewed By: Hanoi On: February 08, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maa! I absolutely love your story! I'm glad you didn't mak Kagome some twitty little school girl. I love running! And Sesshoumaru! I Love running with Sessoumaru! HeHe! Please update soon. My happiness depends on it!
| Title: coolio
Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 19:35 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really good!!! I like how Sess has to deal with all this sorts of stuff. great how you're making it a sess/kag. Gotta love that pairing! But you should probably put in more of Inu trying to hit on Kag and stuff. It wud make it more like a race, as the title says..... Okay i got really 'teacher review' theer for a second... You know how teachers say stuff like, 'great job, keep working' and those tiny litle things that don't say anything? Yeh I hate it when they do that. Anyway, hurry and Update!
| Reviewed By: Platerair Queen On: December 20, 2003 13:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A little romantic scene, neh? ... At least I thought so. ^__^ Hoo hum, ^__^ I loved this chapter, and hope you update soon! :D Bye!
| Reviewed By: Platerair Queen On: December 20, 2003 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^___^ Oh, yeah, on further notice: I changed my pen name on MSN. :P Just type in my e-mail address, and it'll work, anyways. I know that even though I'm pressing ENTER to space these damn sentences, to begin a new topic - they end up not like so! >.< It's raising my ire... Anyways, yay! He and Kagome danced! AND IT'S A KAG/SESS!!! I'm incredibly happy! I bet that that man was Naraku, eh? Unless his name was in there somewhere, and I missed it... ... ... Oh, well! ^__^ Great chapter!
| Reviewed By: Platerair Queen On: December 20, 2003 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^__^ Hoo hoo hoo! I read that last sentence and it always manages to make me positively tingly! .... Not down there between... - not that you you're thinking that... because I think like that - SOMETIMES, not all the time. Ahem! >> I'm gonna look back one day at this review and frown. Lovely chapter, but now it's time for the next one! ^__^
| Reviewed By: Platerair Queen On: December 20, 2003 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though I read all the chapters, I wanted to review for them all! ^__^ You know, you should get more reviews for your story. Hmm... Damn, if only this site was like fictionpress.net! Then, you COULD advertise your work! ^__^ That'd be so great! Though, I personally, never advertise my work... I don't know how. :D Anyways, enough of my rambling! On to the next chapter! ^__^
| Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was so good i hope you can update soon.. then again i say that to everyone if i like their story's ::giggle:: i need to start writing something diffrent...sigh...
| Reviewed By: Just Nobody On: December 11, 2003 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way cool!!!!! I luv it, very original luv the Sess/Kag pairing they're kinda like Yin and Yang ne? Well keep up the good work! Another chapter too please!!!!! Sincerely, Just Nobody
| Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 08:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good really good.....
| Title: Superb!
Reviewed By: Platerair Queen On: November 30, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, the summary alone was enough to draw me in, but the chapters completely enthralled me, so much more. I, indeed, loved how original this was, especially the characters' status' in the story. However, I noticed a few spelling errors, but nothing that will detrack a person from the chapter itself - so, as a writer myself (from a different site), I want to see if you would allow me to be your beta-reader. I can fix up those tiny errors for you, for each chapter, if you want. But, that's just a proposal, it wasn't meant as an implication of insult towards you, whatsoever. I hope to hear a reply from you, and I hope you update further! ^__^ Whoops, almost forgot: Here's where you can contact me at: platerairqueen@yahoo.ca Or... lil_sister_14@hotmail.com P.S. I would prefer that you use the hotmail account, since I rarely check my yahoo one. On another note, you can contact me on MSN Messenger - just use my hotmail account e-mail, and search for my name: Sesshomoru may be evil, but he is sure damn sexy!:D ... That's my pen name... >> I love his character! ^___^ Oh, yeah, before I forget: I vote for Sesshomoru/Kagome! :D Oh, yeah, if you find ay spelling errors in this review - yell at me for it, because I'm trying extra hard to stop my fingers from slipping - :P See ya, and hope for your reply! :)
| Reviewed By: inu's girl On: November 26, 2003 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this stories interesting!i hope that its an inu/kag fic
| Reviewed By: sesshoumaru_lover2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good but what will happen to kagome will she be popular or no. you better wright more
| Reviewed By: Demonchic-K [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this rocks, you have gotta update. Also, i like how your keeping every character the way they should be/act. LOVE IT! UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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