| "The Conflicting Desires" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Title: Vote
Reviewed By: I See Stupid People [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2004 19:36 CST
Comment/Review:
This is good so far UNLESS you make it a Inu/Kag one so my vote is Tama/Kag
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Title: Miaka
Reviewed By: SoulHunterJa9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 16:30 CST
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I think Miaka should either get with Kouga or die painfully. She needs to stay away from Sesshoumaru though! **clings to Sesshoumaru and bares her fangs at Miaka** Good fic by the way!
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Reviewed By: Gin Aibu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 17:49 CST
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Way to go! I love this story! And i think that it should be Miaka/Kouga. Lol, lets hope he can handle her appitite. Anyway, i think that hotohori should come in next, and that the mask gyu...can't remeber his name, should be the one to have his memories! Anywat Plz update sooner than u did before. Update! Ja Ne
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Title: A little praise... a little flame
Reviewed By: thequestionmark On: February 14, 2004 06:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has potential, I feel it. But by the second chapter, it brushes off, not because the story isn't interesting, it's just the spelling issue in Chapter Two. I know many people don't know how to spell the peoples names. However, you could have easily looked it up, like Tasuke should be spelled Tasuki. Nariku should be spelled Nuriko. Also, how you put Miaka... the whole lust thing and Tamahome being the hottest guy. I don't think Miaka would be like that. She is a lot more pure than that(she is a miko, after all.) Other than those two facts, I enjoyed the fanfic, like I put above, the enjoyment factor is high. I think anyone who can overlook the misspellings and OOC, they could easily enjoy this fanfic. ~the?~
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Title: A little praise... a little flame
Reviewed By: thequestionmark On: February 14, 2004 06:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has potential, I feel it. But by the second chapter, it brushes off, not because the story isn't interesting, it's just the spelling issue in Chapter Two. I know many people don't know how to spell the peoples names. However, you could have easily looked it up, like Tasuke should be spelled Tasuki. Nariku should be spelled Nuriko. Also, how you put Miaka... the whole lust thing and Tamahome being the hottest guy. I don't think Miaka would be like that. She is a lot more pure than that(she is a miko, after all.) Other than those two facts, I enjoyed the fanfic, like I put above, the enjoyment factor is high. I think anyone who can overlook the misspellings and OOC, they could easily enjoy this fanfic. ~the?~
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Reviewed By: Sailor Saturn On: December 23, 2003 13:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Just wanted to say kikyos sisters name is kaede
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Reviewed By: love*anime On: December 22, 2003 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
way too much a/n interuption. Ialso like#1,she and kouga get it on.
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Title: Inu Yasha's better
Reviewed By: Mayura16 On: December 18, 2003 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where's the romance?? And why haven't you updated?!? GRR! Well I vote that Miaka and Sess get together b/c I'm sick of everyone obsessing over him! Inu Yasha's the good guy, and the way he gets all mad is so adorable. Update soon and keep Miaka away from Inu Yasha, he and Kagome belong together.
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Title: girls names
Reviewed By: P.P.MACHAN On: December 06, 2003 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You asked for girls' names in one of your fics I hope it was this one: leiko- arrogant mika- flower stem amaya- night rain hitomi- eye hotaru- firefly izumi- fountain kiyoko- clean child moriko- forest child nana- apple nanashi- w/out name naoko- obedient child saki- cape suzume- sparrow ume- plum blossom usagi- rabbit
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Title: sg. mink mink
Reviewed By: miki usagi On: December 06, 2003 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was so funny!i laughed out loud a lot. tell everyone you know to read it. its my favorite so far! i think miaka should get w/ kouga,but something bad should happen...im not really sure what. use spell check, it works. shippo should hook up with someone...preferably mioga. keep going i wanna see what else happens and who meets who. keep up the good work and dont let your lack of reviews discourage you!
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Reviewed By: Gin Aibu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!! This is reall ygood so far. You absolutely gotta keep going. If you don't I will not stop bugging you. Okay enough with the threats. The person who you named 'Blah' is Tai Yi-Jun (this isn't some random thing I know, I looked it up). I reall ywant you to keep going
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Reviewed By: Grifter On: December 02, 2003 19:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey cuz! Just read the two new ones. Not bad. Twice Removed: I am not familiar with the characters you used in this one. Maybe it's from the other series you mentioned in the prologue/intro/opening? As for your remembering the name of the old lady; why don't you use 'old woman' or 'old lady' instead of 'blah' LOL. Would be better to read and no one whould need to know you forgot the name of the old woman. Though I am not familiar with the characters and the overall plot and story of the anime series you are fanficing, I thought that it was pretty good. Taking In Tamahome: Was Kaede(Kikyo's sister) the old woman you were referring to previously? This one was not that bad. I liked this one better than the second one because I know the characters and story of Inu Yasha. All in all, nice effort and they seem to be going well. I look forward to reading your next adventurous stories.
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Title: Truth Herts
Reviewed By: Grifter On: December 02, 2003 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey. Me again. Just replying to Zan's reply. Firstly, I didnt' call it 'other one'; I called it 'Kenshin one'. Second, it was not as amusing as the Inu Yasha one, at least the first one, haven't read the other ones yet. Thrid, I have watched Inu Yasha from the beginning so I can visualize the characters and know of their traits better. Whereas for Kenshin I only saw it from the middle and off and on. Sorry if I decreased your writing stamina but hey, you gotta take the praises and criticisms and enhance your next venture. Anyways, Ame, you got to stop replying to your own stuff. LOL. And is it kinda weird that it's the cuz and friend who are reviewing the fanfic? Think you should come up with a catchy title that sets your fanfic apart from the rest. Well those are my opinions so don't let them get up down or lift you up. I got no clue what I am talking about. LOL.
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Title: Right!
Reviewed By: Chokoreeto Ame and Lorilyn Zan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 16:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey this is Zan writing... not Ame to herself again... not that that wouldn't be typical schizo Ame... Anyway, sorry for being so slow but it looks like you don't need me. Awesome job!! And by the way Grifter... I resent that!!! We worked hard on our so called 'other one.' That's the last time I lend YOU anything! Keep up the good work!!
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Title: Yasha Inu Good
Reviewed By: Grifter On: November 25, 2003 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey cuz! Great work! Think this one is a bit better than the Kenshin one because it is a bit more funny. And I know this anime better so I can picture the characters better than Kenshin. I really should start writing some of my own. Well good job and keep it up.
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