| "The Blue Vespa" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: neverine On: November 26, 2007 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz continue or have you on another site if so make an authors note chapter and tell where
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Title: ummm
Reviewed By: Naota On: September 28, 2005 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz write more, plz read this review, i would hate to see this fic go to long without update and addition, its one of the best fics here, so plz, finish the fic, ok?
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Reviewed By: Naota On: September 18, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was pretty good, you did a good job describing Tane, and the creativeity is very good to, you got almost all of facts right (haruko never told me about the destroying of worlds, but i dont know why she would)
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Reviewed By: Luckyguy On: August 23, 2005 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well..........What can i say really besides...I loved it.All the prior reviewers for this gave it a 10 and i more than agree.A lot of unsuspected things in my opinon which is a really good thing.
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Reviewed By: Xiantaru89 On: December 12, 2004 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aghhhh the wait is kiling me please update soon its been forever
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Reviewed By: rini_incarnat On: July 20, 2004 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story please keep going! i love tane she's a great charectar!
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Title: Welcome back
Reviewed By: Craig(takun) On: May 27, 2004 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iris Sun Great Job on The New Chapter.Are Going To bring Haruko Back To Mabase? Because Haruko's Braclet had to of reacted to The N O power right. How is this For a title to one of your chapters "the Haruhara Sisters Clash" And Iris Sun I have To be honest. I am not really a fan of fan Fics. But, I can actually see your chapters with Haruhara Tane being episodes of FLCL. in fact she is the only one(fanficional character) I loved enough to make her a wrestler on my SMACKDOWN Here comes the pain. She is kicking ass.(man and woman alike) I do Have A question though? how Do You pronounce Tane Tane as in Pain Tane as in Tan or something else? EMail me at canticraig@hotmail.com Thanks
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Title: *sobbing*
Reviewed By: Iris Sun On: May 21, 2004 10:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Trust me, my beloved fans, there is an ending. My internet is down at home, so I'm writing this from school. In the next chapter, Tane does get a 'bat' from her dear old sister and saves Naota's life. Later on... yeah... can't tell you all that much. I will be back!
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: Craig [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I've loved your story it's been awesome. So what is in store for Takun and Tane. please do not do a FLCL ending and leave us hanging PLEASE. It is getting to good to end it this way. If you need an idea here is one. on the last chapter Tane begins to look like Haruko well, you basically said she was surprised. farther more you said she was calmer then Haruko. so Have her say something else about haruko that upsets takun and then he grabs the Rickenbacker he hit's Tane over the head with it. Now she has the horn. Which turns into her Bat(guitar) then after she weilds it against something (preferibly not takun) she finds that she likes doing it. And you choose what to do after that. what do you think
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Title: -.-
Reviewed By: Hakumei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 00:19 CST
Comment/Review:
well...ok i dont really have much to say here....well actually i have alot to say here...but id rather have you im me or something...its...a bit much to put all of it in some stupid little review box....so here im sn im me when you can. FrozenTears013 ~*~Hakumei~*~
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Reviewed By: KIKI93 On: January 25, 2004 19:19 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE
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Reviewed By: X_23 On: January 21, 2004 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story. Please continue writing it.
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Reviewed By: WarriorMage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet story. please i'm on my knees post new chapter soon
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Title: Fin!?!?!
Reviewed By: Amaya On: December 23, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just what I've been looking for! -PLEASE- finish it!!! For me!?!?
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Reviewed By: Laydee DeathStrike On: December 06, 2003 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm writing one just like urz. only itz a Ninamori/Naota one. keep it up. I'm luvvin it so far^^
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