| "Confusing Game" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the twist your putting to this. Please continue!
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Title: sooooo sad v_v
Reviewed By: amanda01 On: December 01, 2003 09:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sooooo sad plz plz continue hiei??liking somone they say when that happens hell frezzes over....but plz plz plz put it back aas it was because i don't think the guy deserves that....
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 15:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I luv ur story please update soon and how come the chappies are so short you should make them longer
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: November 30, 2003 13:59 CST
Comment/Review:
You could make The chapters longer. They're a lil too short.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HATE cliffies! Why must there be cliffies in every story!?!?!?!? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 10:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice start so far. You could have made it longer though. Oh yeah, tell Inu he is a mutt because he is a cross breed. (no offense)
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon! This is a really good begining.
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