| "Golden Gaze" Reviews/Comments [ 192 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 29, 2004 18:44 EST
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Thanks for updateing! I would have asked you to update but your on my fave list! adios!
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Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 10:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooo.... I like! Please write more! Please? Good-good! (gone crazy.... back soon...) Loved the fic, but that last chapter was really much too short! Waaah! Then again, I read it all at once, so... I guess I shouldna complain too much. But please make chapter 10 much longer! Please-ness? Oh well. Don't listen to the crazy-person, listen to all the people who feel the same as the crazy-person. Kays? Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Caladriel On: January 17, 2004 23:38 EST
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GAH!! You stopped! No!!! Evil cliffie! *sobs* Please please please please please (you get the point) update soon. Onegai?? This is such a good fic. I am in awe of your writing powers. Once again...update?? Ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 16:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Wowwowwowwowwowwowwowwowwow This is great! Please continue it's one of the best that's up right now.
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *forgot to sign in first* On: December 28, 2003 01:12 EST
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Happy belated fifteenth birthday!! ^_^ You were born on the shortest day of the year... lucky. ;) Hope your holiday season is treating you well and inspiring you! ^.~
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 19:00 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Please update soon.
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Title: *one FINAL note.... for this chapter*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 01:32 EST
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Youko needs to wipe away Kagome's tears and snuggle up with her by the fire!!!! *blinks* O-kay, we know who's had too much caffine tonight...
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Title: chapters 8&9
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 01:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thanks for those emails... I really love this story so far. In fact, since you told me that ff.net has more chapters... I've had to FIGHT my browser from taking me there. ;) How could I DARE fight off my Youko... I must be nuts. I'm sorry, I can't help it. I LOVE these lines: "His woman was becoming aroused. By some other youkai." *snickers* Yay!! Hiei! (Can I help it if I have a small Hiei fetish too?) Uhhh.. I don't know if I noticed her place the shard on him or not, but... go Kagome! WTF... ch9 was WAY too short. It had no chance of quenching my thirst. I NEED more!!!!!! Or else I run off to ff.net and read them... But if I do that, you'll have to notify me EVERY time you update there! (Personally, I think you need more mm.org reviews anyway-- nevermind the fact that ff annoys me) Gah!! Youko, where are you????????? To make up for ch9, chapter 10 MUST have Kagome/Youko interaction. If it doesn't... then you already wrote/posted it on ff.net, you sneak. ;) Write more of this AND post it HERE. ^_~
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Title: Great so Far!
Reviewed By: Narani On: December 19, 2003 13:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your story! I do hope you update it as soon as you can! This one is on FF.NET too right? Cause I think I saw it on there once, no matter. I like this story of yours, and I KNOW its going to end very well, it just has too. And what gets to me is, What exactly is going to happen? Is she going to be with Youko or Kurama in the future? Its actually kind of confusing and makes you want to REALLY know what happens next. Great job on this! Keep it up k?! ^_^ ~Narani
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Title: I want to share
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 16:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that for a true blue Inuyasha x Kagome lover...would find it hard to write a story where kagome and inuyasha arn't together, excpecialy when your not going to kill him off, or make him a jerk...I'm dreading and looking forward to when Inuyasha *might* leave Kagome, I'll bet you'll make me cry for sure
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: December 18, 2003 15:25 EST
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Love it! Keep writing! Adios!
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Title: insanity
Reviewed By: alalalalalalalala On: December 17, 2003 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh dear god is it a requierment that you have to beinsane to write a good fan fic *shakes head* oh well good job and keep going
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Reviewed By: The Black Kat On: December 16, 2003 21:10 EST
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update please hurry....hurry....I want to know what happens next! Ja!
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Title: *forgot something*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 01:30 EST
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OH! More on that Sess/Genie idea... funny is good and nice to read, but I VERY much love angst. (Throw in humor anyway sometimes to lighten the mood so you won't find yourself crying as you write. Yup, that happens to me too.) It's the only thing I can write ALmost well, anyway. Plus, it gives us authors more opportunities to torture Sess. I mean, since he's so cold in the anime (except around Rin)... I just LOVE breaking through that ice. Well, I'd like to, anyway. Maybe I should stick to writing emotionless characters. As soon as I TRY to give them hearts, they start crying. *lol* j/k I'm not THAT bad-- okay, maybe I am. *Listening to "My Immortal" by Evanescence and always thinks of Sesshoumaru* I'm just too emotional for my own good some days. Well, every day. Take care! ^_^
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Title: *hooked on Youko*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 01:18 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*chuckles* Just why IS Youko's tone so seductive??? Whether chuckle, words, or her name... I can't get enough. I just love his smirk to death! :) *snickers* Heh heh heh. I've read IY fics where Kagome sees Inu and Kikyo... but this just kicks their butt!! He saw, right? *evil chuckles* Ha ha, Kagome's getting more action that YOU!! And what a man... whoo! (That was brutal to read-- in the sense that I was jealous as Hell.) Thanks for sending me that email, it was completely sweet of you. ^_^ When you update on MM.org, they'll tell me when you update so you don't have to. I'll have to resist reading the other chapters on ff.net. Why? So you'll get more reviews here, of course. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed the review. That was one of my less insightful ones and probably my more... (there's no nice way to put this)... excited view. Heh. To me Youko is a drug. I need more of him and this story. ^.~ OH, on your notes... 1)More information on future projects in your profile is optional. I do that rarely myself :) ...2)Personal websites are cool. I should have one myself because I've WAY too many fics to post and keep up with. As scatterbrained as I am, I never finish many of them :( ...3)*snickers* I just LOVE torturing Sesshoumaru!!! Could it explain why I've cast him in all my (unposted/finished) IY fics to date? And the genie idea rocks! I just LOVED that old show "I Dream of Jeannie!" So you know, if the story's good... then we readers don't care if it's an OC or not, really. Well, that's true for me, anyway. ...4)Um, well, I hope Suuichi DOES meet Kagome in her time. AND I want them to end up together in this story. But that's me. Do NOT be another "Forces of Nature." I just HATED that ending SO much! Killing Kikyo's always a plus. ;) j/k Torturing Inu is fun. ...5)Your fic marked as my favorite on BOTH sites! ^_^ You want fic ideas?? *fidgets* As the queen of The Block, I have HUNDREDS of fic ideas (in many fandoms) that never work out. Mostly 'cause I suck as an author. :P I only have half as many unfinished stories. For instance, even though I have 2 IY fics posted online I also have... at least 5 others that I've been working on and off on. And I mean uber pages for some of them. I have this NASTY habit of never thinking my work is ready enogh to post. Plus, I forget to format stuff. *heh* Okayokay... did that review rival the length of your author's notes? Sorry about that. I got a little... hyper after reading that new chapter. Youko is still my sex god! (Btw, even though your bio says your 15, you have a greater grasp of the language than I did at your age. Compared to you, I'm old. 20. *heh*)
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