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Reviewed By: Addicted 2 Kitsune On: December 27, 2003 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really awsome fic! I can't wait until u update, so please do soon!!!This story has a lot of potential. please, Please, PLEASE UPDATE!!!! I originally thought that it should be a Y/K fic but now I don't know!! I'm so confused. But I'm sure that whatever you pick will be good. Just please don't make it a Kuwa/K fic though or I will be seriosly depressed!! So update soon! see ya later
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Reviewed By: silver storm (kitroku) On: December 23, 2003 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story please continue. also i vote for i/k pairing
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Reviewed By: Kenra On: December 22, 2003 16:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooh! I vote Yusuke and Kagome. Cause it's nice and there are too many Hiei/Kags and Kurama/Kags. Some people don't think there are a lot, but the votings usually end up K/K or H/K. But I vote Y/K.
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! I'm leaning toward a Kur/Kag pairing myself, but I'm sure to like which ever you deside on! Update soon!
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Title: Kewlness!
Reviewed By: Serena0584 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your style of writing, but I don't really like the whole songfic idea. Don't get me wrong, I like your fic, it's great, I just don't like placing songs in chapters. *shrug* It's your story though, so I can't complain. ^_~ I didn't know what to rate for originality and creativity, because I don't know what your going to do with this story! :) For the enjoyment factor, it was for the same reason as the style of writing. Also.. Hiei/Kagome pairings are enjoyed.. *coughHINTcough* Lol. Oh well. It's up to you. Update soon! ~Serena
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Reviewed By: nienty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this!! i love inyuasha though so keep him there come on now Im a girl by the way. ANd i liek this fic alot when somthing makes me cry it is good cause in some ways i have a hardened soul. (exposed to too much negativity i pose) Any way enough babling about me your story is good I like it keep on going :)
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Title: Gorgeous
Reviewed By: yasai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really wonderful piece. And I love that song. You really made your writing fit with the song and lyrics - admirable. I remember first hearing that song. And mum told me what it was about. I started crying. I was only eight or so. I never listened to it again; it always made me tear up. And now I have a craving for Eric Clapton and Tears in Heaven ... Beautiful, Beautiful piece. Please update. Sorry, I have no suggestions for the pairing. I'm sure whatever you choose will be awesome. So pick what you think will be best! Keep up the excellent, excellent work! I want to read more!
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 06:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm such a sucker...I've been reading and watching Inuyasha for a year now and I'm totally attached to the charactors...so when someone writes that they die and then describe to me the pain of the others *and sticks in a really sad song* I can't help but ball my blue eyes out...and by the way...I cried for this chapter too *I think maybe I like to cry* ~_^ ja ne
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Reviewed By: M52 On: November 27, 2003 20:06 CST
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Make it a YYH/Iy crossover please. And I vote for something other than Iy/Kag. preferably Yus/Kag, but not many people like that, so you'll probably do Hiei/Kag or Kur/Kag or something if you do YYH.
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Title: you should.....
Reviewed By: nienty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 14:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I dont like to give my opinion and this the first review i have ever given but the reason i dont like to give my opinion is because it makes it sound like im tellin you what to do with your story. ANy way I liked this it made me sad and i love it when a story touches me in any way. You should keep it iny/kag and just them and the inyuasha story if you know what i mean. but then again this is your story so do what you will , I liked it so far hurry and update so i can read on. :)
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(not signed in) On: November 27, 2003 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think it should be a yyh cross over please update
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Title: I remember crying when I first heard that song
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 06:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a perfect song to go with you sad story...I don't really mind eaither way if its a yyh or a Kenshin cross over...but its great so far...I hope you can make me cry again soon ~_^
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