| "Under the Sakura Trees" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute story
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved that fic. please make a 2nd one. maybe you could make a fic with chapters and stuff basing on this fic. from your friend, maria ja ne
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Title: This fic has so much potential
Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write so beautifully, but you shouldn't rush through such a great story. This story has so much potential, but it needs more description, more time for the reader to get absorbed. When you rush, the reader does not have a chance to get caught up in the moment before the mood/ scene changes. You see? I hope that you continue this fic, but I mostly hope that you revise it and make in longer. Give the characters a chance to react, and explain to the reader what each of them is going through. I eagerly await what you will do with this very promising fic. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Demonmistress On: December 18, 2003 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so much I just had to review!!!! You need to write a sequel. I hope the pup is a boy with dog ears like his father. I love the ending!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 13:53 CST
Comment/Review:
awww
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Reviewed By: SockeA On: December 13, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i LOve your fanfic Hope you make more chaps!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes but it was really sweet!
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was really good, and really sweet. I hope you do write a sequal, I would really like to read more :)
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Reviewed By: Ceirra On: December 04, 2003 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please sequel sequel sequel!!! i loved it!
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Reviewed By: Kagney On: December 01, 2003 12:34 CST
Comment/Review:
This was a very good story. Please make a sequel.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please a sequel
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eee! good job! heh...glad Yash finally got let it all out lol. At least Kagome is happy that she's with pup ne? Well-i hope ya rwrite a sequel! if ya do, can you email me at abekitt1@hotmail.com plz? Tanks...well, good job hun! good lemonade, and i hope ya rite a sequel! -Lani
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Misao-chan On: November 28, 2003 11:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a greta fanfic! i loved it! very good. i want a sequel!(sp?) pleease!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Demonchic-K [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 11:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it-and since u wanted reveiws im reveiwing. i like this story. I also like how the end of the story wasn't the end of the lemon, it ended a different way-it was so SWEET!
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Reviewed By: LemonyFresh On: November 28, 2003 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes!! write a sequel!!! make it a romantic comedy where Inuyasha has to go baby shoppin wit kagome at her time...and he has to marry her and stuff like that!!! a sequel would b so cute!! ^_^ oh BTW this one was really gooooood! =]
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