| "Under the Sakura Trees" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Demonchic-K [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 11:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it-and since u wanted reveiws im reveiwing. i like this story. I also like how the end of the story wasn't the end of the lemon, it ended a different way-it was so SWEET!
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Reviewed By: LemonyFresh On: November 28, 2003 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes!! write a sequel!!! make it a romantic comedy where Inuyasha has to go baby shoppin wit kagome at her time...and he has to marry her and stuff like that!!! a sequel would b so cute!! ^_^ oh BTW this one was really gooooood! =]
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww! lemony tart, then sugary sweet!!! Keep it up! ^~^
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Title: ch 1
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well there are a couple of spelling errors, nothing too bad. Everything is understandable. *laughs* Ye-gads I LOVED Kagome's reaction to the news! *laughs harder imagining such a reaction* I do hope you consider a sequel! I'd love to see where you'll take them from here!
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Reviewed By: maronus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 09:42 CST
Comment/Review:
well since no else has ben kind to review i will very good keep working!
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