| "I'd Trade It All" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ishkabod On: June 20, 2004 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well the reasoning is everyone can improve and i have three classes of writers You are a good writer and i couldn't see many falts in your writeing except the author notes that constantly break up the flow of the story. You need to work on that. one other thing is your sentence structure on occasion is confusing. A beta reader will help in that area. Your writeing overall is very very very very enjoyable and i encourage you to write some more. You have potential to become a really really really good writer but the author notes really hurt the flow of the story. I'm really enjoying the story so Thanks for writing. Ishkabod (you can find my profile at ff.net if you wanna comment on this review)
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Title: WAAHHH!!!
Reviewed By: Naotas Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 19:15 CDT
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omg i haven't even read your fic yet (i copy and paste them into a wordpad to read later) AND IT SEEMS SO GOOD!!! (AND FLUFFY!! ^-^) oh well i really want to read it!! Ja ne!
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Title: oh my god
Reviewed By: XOXOinuLOVER_luna On: June 15, 2004 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"oh my.....GOD....h-how did....y-you do this.... AWSOME FIC!!!!!!!!!" *starts jumping around happly while people start to stare at me like im crazy* {O_O!!!} "WHAT I JUST LOVE THE FIC YA CRAZY PEOPLE!!!!!" {^_~!!!} "sorry for the STARING PEOPLE!!!!!" *starts bitching at them* "sorry for keeping ya wating cuz of these jackasses" anyway,this is my first time reading this so sorry if i didn't review in the past,but i hope that you can put up the next chapter soon because i really love your work.im not going to be able to check for another week,sorry,but please have it up by then" {P.S. if you dont i will cry T_T!!!!!} love ya much,Luna the gansta girl
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so sad and yet so happy at the same time!!! god i never want to graduate!! i want to stay in high school for ever for it is the best time of our lives no matter what ppl think it is when we first find love and go from being children to adults and we should never forget that!! the love then we should never forget!! so much love never forget the love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: that-was-soooo-cool On: June 13, 2004 20:36 CDT
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i totally loved ur fic!!! i laughed alot, cried alot and everything in between! *snifle* i dont want it to be over yet! so plz make the sequel! *sobs* plz!!
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Title: otay tool
Reviewed By: me On: June 13, 2004 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
otay i would love to read the sequel and the story chappie and everything was the bomb
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Title: yo!
Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool just got finished reading wut u had its a bit funny and lovable i like how it is kags awsome inu is totally ooc but awsome and the rest the same its so cooll sorry im a little hyper on a sugar high n am kinda thinkin im on sumpin at the momentary hope u more reviews
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Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i looooooove it!! PLEEZE update soon, i'm dying oof curiosity, doees kikyo get put in the "slammer"? do inu and kag get married? become mates? and what of the other cute couples?what happens to them? and what will kagome think of inuyashas graduation surprise? hurry up! im dyin here!!!
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: Sess's Mate On: April 17, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEYYYYYYYY! Look for this new CD called Three days Grace it's not what u think it is it's a new punk rock CD!!!!!! Oh a trapt hehe LOOK 4 it it's grate! Yuna~
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Title: sweetness!!!!
Reviewed By: Kenuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it when inuyasha and kagome were snugglin' in their blanket together on Christmas day. Please write your next chapter soon! Gee, can you tell that I am a big kenshin and inuyasha fan? Later! Hugs and kisses!
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Title: I hate kikyo
Reviewed By: hEllo! On: April 07, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI I'm friend of Sess's wife. She told me to read this story about kag/Inu and I didn't at first think it would be good. But when I started to read it I felling love with it keep writing. and make kikyo suffer what a stupid bitch! well g2g
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Sess's Wife On: April 05, 2004 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello plz don't take long on the next one plz me and my friends are like dying right now! Oh and new Inu eps are coming on April 29! on adult swim! YAY I LOVE INUYAHSA! And Sesshomaru well duh! bye I LOVE YOUR STORY!
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Reviewed By: *Nagasaki On: March 31, 2004 18:21 CST
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i love the chapter and i can't wait until your next one! you didn't tell us what happened with inuyasha after kagome said,"oh,inu~y~a~sh~a~~~~~a" i stil can't believe kikyou is pleading innocent!!!!!!!!!!!!!! she has something up her sleeve...i just know it. great story so far!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 21:57 CST
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inuyasha is gonna get it! how can you make kagome so violent? great story so far! i can't wait until your next chapter!!!!
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Title: blahhhh
Reviewed By: inuyasha fan (hehe) On: March 16, 2004 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!!!!!!!!! omg..i loved this fic...yeah..i just knoticed it today and red all of it!! yeah...weellll...anyways...i love your creativity...and it put me at the edge of my seat...umm..yeah...i was thinking...dont make inuyasha a human...and umm..have inuyasha soon claim kagome as his mate ^.^ hehe...cuz they need to be together and have lil kagome's and inuyasha's runnin around...AHHAHAHAHAHHA...and kikyo...well..as fer her...LIFE IN PRISON!!!!!!!!! muahahahhahahahahahah sincerely, samantha:))))
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