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Reviewed By: neuroticsquirrel On: January 25, 2005 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come baaaaaaaaaaack! I love this fic! You have such interesting ideas.
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 05:55 CST
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Hey, I still love it, I really do! I'm happy you updated! I'm NOT disappointed with this chapter, keep going...Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 13:04 CST
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Write more! This is a nice take on the story and I love reading about pre-Weiss Aya.
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Reviewed By: Kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 13:04 CST
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Write more! This is a nice take on the story and I love reading about pre-Weiss Aya.
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Reviewed By: Maple On: December 23, 2003 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it.
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Reviewed By: Nymphaea On: December 18, 2003 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay there's more! But ahk the misunderstandings! poor poor Ayan and Yotan...I hope they figure things out soon, ne? (but angst is always a good thing! ^_^)Write more, write more!
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Reviewed By: Theresa On: December 18, 2003 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great continuation! More soon, please!
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Title: Meant To Be
Reviewed By: tammy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, it's always kinda sad to think of how Ran might have been before Weiss. Please update soon.
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Title: Meant to Be?: Paths Cross
Reviewed By: Huge Aya/Yohji Fan On: December 06, 2003 08:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this. Never seen read a fanfic like it. Having the boys meet before Ran/Aya joins Weiss is interesting. I hop eyou will continue because I feel an angst fest coming with this story. And after all the angst I hope that Aya and Yohji can be together and happy!
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Reviewed By: Theresa On: December 02, 2003 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! I loved it! Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Toni Aogiri On: December 01, 2003 19:55 CST
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Ohh!!! You have to continue it! it's so sad, yet cute. you *do* realize that Ran was 17 when the explosion happened, and Aya 16? and he was 19 when he joined Weiss? meh. ah well. poor Yohji though... he *cried!* and i thought he wasnt over Asuka? ah well, that's why it's *fan*fiction. cause you can change things. ^_^ Continue this, me like!
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 13:07 CST
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BEAUTIFUL...nothing there to flame about! And hey, it was your first WK-fic...it is really good. The scene at the end where Yohji discovered this terrible thing...*huh* how horrible! I'm really looking forward to the next part! Ja Koji-chan
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Reviewed By: talyssa_ On: November 30, 2003 02:56 CST
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lessee.....i did like this, but i've got a few bits to say. first you should prolly pop an "AU" warning up at the top there. second, in japan people don't tip (ie yohji left a tip on the table but tipping for anything isn't a custom here) and they say soccer, not football. I thought the start of the relationship between ran and yohji, or at least, yohji's development of such strong feelings was a tad too quick too. But overall it was an enjoyable read, and I can see that this part was mostly just to set the scene and whatever, so the too-fastness isn't a major detractor I think. errrrr all the other reviews say something about no quotation marks but i dun remember having any issues with that......but my character set is japanese so maybe thats affecting it? Anyway i'm looking forward to more of this, and i especially appreciate the length of this first part.Some people really rush the scene setting and it makes it erally hard to get into the story but this why i'm just eagerly waiting to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: Rabid Rabbit On: November 29, 2003 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. I hope you'll continue it! And I liked how Ran was OOC. If you continue it, you can make him a cold bastard like he usually is, and it would show really well how the explosion changed him. Could become a great plot! Once again, I hope that you continue the story! I really look foward to reading it! P.S. I liked your writing style, but it was hard to get into the story without any quotation marks!
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Reviewed By: Nymphaea On: November 28, 2003 22:25 CST
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Really cute so far, i like it ^__^! And your Ran and Aya aren't really *that* out of character, it's before all that Takatori mess so... but one question...what happened to your quotation marks and apostrophes? (it cunfusseled my brain at first... but i figured it out...hee :3) bye~!
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