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Reviewed By: gumi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very good start but theres a couple of grammer problems like you keep saying the Inuyasha when i think you mean then Inuyasha. Other than that its realy good! ^-^
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Title: nice fic
Reviewed By: NiteSage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 15:09 CST
Comment/Review:
ummm....the review b4 this...it's mine too! sry.....didn't know i had to sign up here! ummmm.....if u're gonna continue this fic can ya tell me a small preview of the next chp.? -NiteS. NiteSage@hotmail.com
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9(can't sign in...) On: November 29, 2003 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey! Another good fanfic! I like Gome's wish...She can finally forget about it as in Sengoku Jidai, and i think Yash deserves it...although i will probaly be wrong and...gah! newayz, good chapter! Loved it! i can't wait for the next chapter, so please update again soon! -Lani
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: November 29, 2003 14:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Good start. But I need to know. What was Inu gonna tell Kagome? Is she gonna remember him? Update soon. Please!
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Title: ooooooo....good beginning :o
Reviewed By: DemonHuntress On: November 29, 2003 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooo..........it's REALLY good.....((ack! i have nothin ta say!....ma first review)......uh....can u update pretty soon? alot of the other inuyasha fics are a load of crap :( ((Inu RULES!!!!!)) ehehehehe....I'll check back on ur fic again later.....
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