| "By the Cycles of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Title: (L)
Reviewed By: Kizu On: June 30, 2004 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update- I love your story and all the chapters! We all love yout story!! ^^
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Reviewed By: EvilPanda On: June 25, 2004 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the stiry but u pezz finsh it i cant spell today dum day to me
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Title: it was getting good
Reviewed By: KiogoIceFoxFireWolfHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hay that was getting good Shadow: its all ways getting good and then you have to wait but wheres Yano.hes cool. Kiogo: he was so cutie and half coyote my thierd favrite animal.but he still is cutie. Shadow: Oi you said i was cutier than anything *starts to pout* Kiogo: *blushes* i did when did i say that? *blush gets bigger* Shadow: two days ago why? Kiogo: i thought you didn't here me. well neways.... Shadow&Kiogo: SEE YA
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 05:11 CDT
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hm... as far as your comments go, one is their own worst critic. In any case the story seems relatively realistic as far as the characters go. Miroku is a little off but what do I know about demon bloods affect on a human? You are the author of this story and take pride in this. Don't worry, even if people complain they'll read. I know I'm amoung them.
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Reviewed By: L On: June 15, 2004 01:32 CDT
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Very very good. A very big improvement from earlier chapters. Keep writing like this, and all will be well ^_^
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Brennen_Sie_Drachen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hello!! I know how personal life can get in the way. It sucks. I will wait as patiently as I can ok. I really enjoy reading your fic ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 14, 2004 18:18 CDT
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Hope you have an excellent break, look forwards to reading more when you return. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Thats a good idea
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 17:17 CDT
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Well I say its better to take a brake then to let the story brake so you take the time you need, maybe veg out one a couple of days of Inuyasha and get inspired to finish this story with a bang. I like the whole Idea of Miroku and Inuyasha being full demon, but I think that in the last couple of chapters its been a little to focused on the animal instincts, and not their personalitys. What do you think it would be like on the inside of Miroku's mind if he killed some kids intire family. Maybe some emotional turmoil is in order, a struggle with is demon self. I see so much potential for this story so please I hope you find the insperation that you need. I'm keeping this story on my favs so you at least have me still waiting for more. Ja
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Title: By the Cycles of the Moon
Reviewed By: Beauty2004 *not signed in* On: June 14, 2004 16:25 CDT
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Ur story is soo awesome. I hope that you update soon and not in a couple of months...Anyway, i don't think your story is bad like u do, hope you realize that ^_^
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Reviewed By: EvilPanda On: June 14, 2004 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stoury as long as the next part does dont take to long i would like to see how it end keep writing its good
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not signed in...) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 12:08 CDT
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I totally understand! I love your story too much to just abandon you! Just take your time and I'll be ready to read when you are ready to post again! I still think you are a great writer so don't give up! I'll just be patient and be waiting for your return! So take care! :)
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: June 14, 2004 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bah! who cares about those that will leave? that just means they don't realize that you're human. LOL I'll hang around patiently cuz I'm used to it with all these stories I'm reading! Take as much time as you need to make it a great story! Good luck! *waves* ^_^
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *not signed in i think* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 03:42 CDT
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Don't worry I vill never leave you! lol i like your story vay to much! Vho cares about the oocness, as long as it's a good story it's fine. Don't vorry about not updating fast enough, some good stories are left vith an evil cliffy that they never complete. Life issues are to be expected and don't think that you should have to put your life on hold for just some story. It doesn't vork that vay. lol i think i'm really hilarious by replacing all the "W" with "V" lol vell, update as soon as you are able, but trust me, if people really like your story as they say they do in the reviews, then they von't abandon you or else they are just big stupid, meanies vho are big stupid meanies! lol well i honestly think that's enough of my opinions so yeah, Love the story! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 23:58 CDT
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Who is telling you that we are not happy with your work!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! They lied big time!!!!!!!! I loved the last few chapters, the whole story in fact!!!!!!!!!!!! But if you feel that you need to take some time and brainstorm that's fine too, you're not going to lose me as a reader. But I don't think you should let one person stink up everything. You shouldn't change your story to please this one person who was too afraid to even put their name, your story should please YOU.Go and find your muse so you can come back quick because that last cliffie was really evil!!!!! ^_^ Love ya!!!
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Reviewed By: What happened? On: June 13, 2004 21:34 CDT
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This story used to excite me. The first few chapters were wonderful. However, I can't seem to get excited about it anymore because it has not lived up to its potential and has such infrequent updates. I am not sure whether it is because you are trying to drag out the story because you want more reviews or if you have just lost a direction for your plot or if you honestly think the plot twists and extra people make your story better. They do not. It seems like this story has lost its momentum and is just stagnating in overly dramatic dialogue and pointless action. I have lost interest in it. This is not a flame. It is only my opinion. I hope you can redeem this story and make it as good as the first chapters promised it could be. Good luck.
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