| "The Hunt for the Shikon no Tama" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kye On: November 04, 2006 16:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Are you still alive?
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Reviewed By: Kina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool. Original and well written. I like the idea of Kagome and Seshy being an item. Please write lots more.
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Reviewed By: SpringSakura07 On: February 14, 2004 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job so far. i love the way the twins interact with each other. it's so adorable. ^_^ it's really original too. thank god. keep up the good work. i love the story and PLEASE update soon! but if you don't i guess i'll just have to waite, ne? oh yeah, your japanese isn't that bad either. oh, and i know i can be really random too so don't freak. ^.^ well keep up the good work and happy valentines day! ^_~
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good story i cant wait for you to update.
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Reviewed By: japanese_angel12 On: January 02, 2004 12:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg..this is such a great fic. amazing...i bow to you. original...real original i like the twins relationship. real cute. newayz before i blabb on and on on stuff. this was a awsum. unbelievable...plz update real soon...thx
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Title: *and yes, she's still a hentai*
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin *not logging in because there's little point today* On: January 02, 2004 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*he he he* I liked the twin behavior in this newest prologue. (the true Chapter 1 might be posted by the 10th?? Yay!!) Sesshoumaru is so fine....I can't help but say it all of a sudden. *blinks* They're only around 9 and teen Miroku's STILL acting perverted!??!? Kill him!!! *heh* Just kidding. Still, he shouldn't be bothering Sango when she's that young. It's just... wrong. The trick was awesome. And of COURSE Sess knew the difference. ^.~ If he didn't... then I'd boycott this story until he liked her better and could tell the difference. *lol* Just kidding. I would NEVER boycot your stories. ^_^ The twin psychic link thing is cool... but always a little freaky. Kikyo and Kagome will always know when the other likes... ANYone. That could be annoying as Hell. They could never like the same guy without the other knowing. That would suck so much... Then again, I'm underestimating their mental strength and control. Eventually, they could learn to block each other. Now THAT could be handy... *can you tell she's out of it, mentally, and can't come up with a worthy review?* (When I read that part of HP... I was like... Erised? Isn't that desire backwards? I felt all special when I figured it out on my own. Oh my gosh, I don't think I realized that's where your name came from. The "wyn" I figured was celtic. My friend's online author name was "Cerworn" I'm not sure if it's celtic or not... but your name reminded me of her)
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Title: Wow!!!
Reviewed By: jschu On: January 01, 2004 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad to see that you haven't lost your muse. I really like how you set up the story in chapter 1&2, it's rare to see that. I love what I've been reading and can't wait for more on this one and the rest of your stories. Again great job. jschu25
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not loged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, found this chappy funny!! cant wait for the next chap! that incident with the twins was great!! and koga's lines that fallowed about fit him, his type of character would do something like that even if its just to piss off inu. ^_~ till the next chappy!! Bye!!! =^-^= W.T.P.
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Title: Helen
Reviewed By: SpringSakura07 On: December 30, 2003 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes! you finally updated! i thought i was gonna die from the waiting. nice job on the update. i liked it a lot. but i'm wondering how long until the actual story starts. it was interesting how you showed sess training kag. i didn't think the "killing perfection" to be soft. but then again, this is kagome we are talking about. lol. well good luck with your other stories! don't over work yourself, i still want you alive and kicking so you can update your stories! lol. i know bad joke but what can i say. i have a really bad sense of humor. and i'm really bad at spelling come to think of it. well anyways, good luck and HAPPY NEW YEARS!!! helen
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not loged in) On: December 18, 2003 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god!! i already love this story and theres only one chappy out, i cant wait for the next chap. i hope you soon, very very soon!! =^-^= W.T.P.
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Reviewed By: maronus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 22:12 CST
Comment/Review:
very good!!! but longer chaps! love it! more!!!
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Reviewed By: SpringSakura07 On: December 02, 2003 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it a lot. I haven't really read any other sess/kag fic like this one. You did a very good job. Keep up the good work! I also like the way you look back on kagome and sess and their interaction between each other. That was nice cuz i at least gave me some idea of what happened before. Anyways good job. Update soon!
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Title: kool!
Reviewed By: sesshomaruismine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad!cant wait till next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nana-chan On: December 02, 2003 13:35 CST
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I see a very promising fanfic here...the story has a really good potential to be an interesting story with a fresh new idea. You really put thought into your characters and who can resist cute moments between Sesshomaru and Kagome...:) Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: kittyintheraiyn= ^.^ = On: December 02, 2003 03:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful wonderful, i'll await new chapters as much as i need, and with the same wanting as your other stories ^.^
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