| "Kits, Cats, and Ryu" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snowy Yuki On: February 16, 2004 04:23 CST
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when will ya update? don't leave a good story ends just like that.... please update.
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Reviewed By: reasby On: January 29, 2004 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would rework your prologe its kinda odd, but the rest of the fic is enjoyable. As for a Ranma matchup, hmmm I would like to see a Ranma + Kurenai (That female Jounin, that trained Hinata's team).
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Reviewed By: Wind Wanderer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 07:35 CST
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I like this story. YOU MUST CONTINUE!! Please? I wanna see what the villagers will say when they see Naruto
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Reviewed By: foxvixen On: January 04, 2004 02:29 CST
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I love it post more
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Title: It's getting a bit better
Reviewed By: Tetrambs [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 22:36 CST
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Well I like the way you diverged, this will be interesting to read. But serously... Rei Hino! WTF, I swear, if she transforms into a sailor senshi, spouting crap about "Love and Justice" Heads Will Roll! Well either that or get a sturdy repremand. Sigh... Well I'm hoping that the pairings will bring about some really good lemon scenes (bwahahaha!! Please let there be Lemon Scenes, or atleast somewhat Limey) *Nods in a Sage like manner* .... .... .... .... JK .... Kinda!
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Reviewed By: lleb0929 On: December 15, 2003 06:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story and I hope to read more of this soon Please don't take too long in writting more
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Reviewed By: I like cheese On: December 11, 2003 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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excuse me? you made Tenten stupid! >.< she doesn't fight with Bonbori! you should have made her do that funky twin dragon thing she did against Temari! but either way... hm... I think you are making the guys too smart... Ranma may be a good martial artist but he's not very bright... Recca... it even says in the manga "History is the only subject he pays attension in because it talks about ninjas" and Naruto isn't very smart though he fights really well... characters are WAY ooc... I would like a warning next time... but this is a good plot and story nonetheless ... although things moved a bit too fast... and by the way... it's 'Sasuke' not 'Sauske'
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Reviewed By: topquark On: December 11, 2003 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this please hurry up and update soon! will the ero sennin be around !! i hope so. summonings would be cool
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Reviewed By: Phgun On: December 07, 2003 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a good combonation of animes. never been done before and you are a skilled writer.
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Reviewed By: Meilin Hikuro On: December 07, 2003 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i love this so far! i dont know much about the series recca is from(actually, i know nothing of it), but this is a well written crossover that needs continuing!
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Reviewed By: abel On: December 06, 2003 07:21 CST
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i think that this is great!i love ur plot.. however, i feel u need to work on ur characters more..give them more life and letur readers feel for them more..once again, great work!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Shi-chan On: December 05, 2003 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just have to say that I really liked the crossover element. It was unique and that is what I liked about it. I get soooo tired of all the Ranma/Sailor Moon crossovers. I'm one to talk about that since I wrote one myself but I just thought I'd take the time to say good job and I hope to read more soon. Have a great day :)
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Title: I like your story
Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story. It was a nice combonation of Characters!
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: tetrambs [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Never seen a combo like that before! Though I think you should get into conversations a bit more between characters. Other than that I believe you've got the creation of a good series here. Though i suspect you'll need to diverge a bit more from the series a bit more, maybe need to explain how Sasuke and Sakura got into the exam and who the third member of their party is. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: aragan the third On: December 02, 2003 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
what the feck? small for a prolouge and that it's all squeezed into one paragraph...not good for a person reading it I should say. I give you some points for trying to go for a Naruto/ Flame of Recca/ Ranma 1/2 crossover...never think someone might for for that one... your spelling is okay from all those jumbled up words you have. this reads more like a Narrative or something as similar. also...saying that he just refused to commit sucide is really just plain I'd say...is there any reason WHY he didn't go through commiting the ritual sucide? Like wanting to live? thinking that it's stupid or something? give us a reason why he doesn't go through with it. get some proofreaders...as many as you can...it looks like you might need some to make this actually work unless you only just want to fill your ego AND not care about what you write about.
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