| "The Feud: A Marriage Made In Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: KH On: November 30, 2019 13:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stopped reading FanFics almost 10 years ago, but randomly got the
urge to check up on my favs this weekend. Seems there was an exodus
of my favorite writers all at the same time, so hardly any of the
stories I've never forgotten have been finished. I just wanted to
let you know that this one has really stuck with me over the years
and I'll likely keep coming back every once in awhile to check for
updates. I love the mix of suspense with the romance of this story.
I hope you're still writing whether it's fan fics or your own work!
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Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2010 19:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! Really... now my question is since you sed you divide the story into 3 parts umm...is the first part done yet or you're still working on it.???
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Reviewed By: snowbirdyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 10:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please!!!!!!!!!!Where did you disappear to? You left this story hanging. Plus the two sequels. I could cry in frustration! I hope nothing bad has happened to take you away from your stories. Please let your fans know something. At least give us an A/N.
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 15:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW great story can't wait for the next update!!!! Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 10:32 PDT
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YAY you updated :D:D:D:D:D...I love the new chap, it was worth the wait...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 14:19 PST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Taiyoukai Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 17:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey just wanted to encourage you, and tell you that this is one of my favorite fan fics! You do a wonderful job writing and I cant wait for your next update! Keep up the good work, and good luck with the writers block.
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Title: The Feud: A Marriage Made In Heaven
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 17:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: The Feud: A Marriage Made In Heaven
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 07:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2005 17:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really really good story I hope you update soon because I want to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: white angel chi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 16:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic sooo much! My favorite parings are in here and your style of writing is phenominal. I only wish I were that good. Please don't give up on this fic. I love it wayyyy to much. I have hung on to every word of this story as if it were chocolate, (mind you I am a chokoholic), and I am dieing for an update. You are an insparation to the insparationless and a wonder to behold. I hope you will continue to grace us with your godlike writing. (glomps leg) PLEASEEE!!! Ah well, good luck! White Angel Chi
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Title: chapter 8
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 16:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Update again soon. Can't wait to see what happens with Inuyasha/Kikyou and Kagome/Sesshomaru weddings.
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 17:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your story! Please update soon!
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 17:27 PDT
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There was another name switch in chapter 5:>¡ÉThat's how Kagome and Sango found her ten minutes later when they entered the room to check on her. The guest had started arriving and the garden at the back of the castle was swiftly filling up.¡É I think you meant Kikyou in stead of Sango.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 17:26 PDT
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Good job! Somethings to look at in Chapter 2: >¡ÈInuTaisho knew his son would make a great Taiyoukai one day, he had no doubt about that. In turn, he knew his son would need the right woman beside him. . . . it was the fact that Sesshoumaru believed the Higurashis had something to do with his first wife's, Sesshoumaru's birth mother's, death. >Onigumo had his own thoughts on that subject though. He didn't believe the Higurashis had anything to do with his late wife's death. . . Onigumo needed proof first. He would get it too.¡É I think you meant InuTaisho when you wrote Onigumo, ne? (>=new paragraph)
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