| "The Feud: A Marriage Made In Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Title: chapter 8
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 16:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Update again soon. Can't wait to see what happens with Inuyasha/Kikyou and Kagome/Sesshomaru weddings.
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 17:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying your story! Please update soon!
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 17:27 PDT
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There was another name switch in chapter 5:>¡ÉThat's how Kagome and Sango found her ten minutes later when they entered the room to check on her. The guest had started arriving and the garden at the back of the castle was swiftly filling up.¡É I think you meant Kikyou in stead of Sango.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 17:26 PDT
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Good job! Somethings to look at in Chapter 2: >¡ÈInuTaisho knew his son would make a great Taiyoukai one day, he had no doubt about that. In turn, he knew his son would need the right woman beside him. . . . it was the fact that Sesshoumaru believed the Higurashis had something to do with his first wife's, Sesshoumaru's birth mother's, death. >Onigumo had his own thoughts on that subject though. He didn't believe the Higurashis had anything to do with his late wife's death. . . Onigumo needed proof first. He would get it too.¡É I think you meant InuTaisho when you wrote Onigumo, ne? (>=new paragraph)
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Reviewed By: Nir [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 08:05 PDT
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Oh! I've been looking all over for you and this fic! I love it and I Love you and your work. Write More please! ~Sakura Angel =^-^=
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Reviewed By: Destiney On: November 28, 2004 10:55 PST
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please update I really want you to finish this one pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Title: The Feud: A Marriage Made In Heaven
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 15, 2004 17:23 PST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Sesshy's long lost love On: August 17, 2004 01:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely positive ly love it but I have noticed you have not updated in quite a while.Why is that? The story is obviously good and has many admirers.You'd think that is reason enough to hasten in writing the rest,but alas u torture us so with your agonizing torture.Although I shall say that it is definitely worth the wait whether the wait be long or short (preferbly short).I do so hope to read more soon for the story is lovely.Here I go blundering like the idiot I am when u oh so clearly get the message.Sorry for my wondering mind and tongue.I love it.UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!With the nothing really left to say I guess I should bid you a nice and teary goodbye.SEE-YA!!!!
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 01:43 PDT
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Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter.
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Title: hehe
Reviewed By: antisocial mint [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 22:15 PDT
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the trilogy names you picked out sound like a romance novel lol! [don't ask how i know ;)] hehehhehee gl though
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Title: AHHHHHHHHHHHH
Reviewed By: A certain person On: March 24, 2004 17:42 PST
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That is sooooo evil!!!! can you please please please change the sess/kag pairing!!! please please please please please
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 21:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic. Update soon. Would like to see how you plan on putting all three couples together.
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Reviewed By: lraine [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 18:38 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! This stroy is great!!! I hope yoiu update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: kccranfield On: January 16, 2004 23:37 PST
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Hi nice story. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 23:04 PST
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