| "Military Warfare" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Title: (im not logged in cause my computers an ass...-.-)
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AYE! You must write more soon! I love it so sososososososososososos much! So get writing! NOW!!!!!!! (oh, and your AN's are really, really funny!...im such a freak...-.-;;)
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: kikyo should die On: January 03, 2004 16:08 CST
Comment/Review:
update faster
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Reviewed By: hallie On: January 03, 2004 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very creative plz update soon
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Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Agh! I loved the "kiss" scene. If you can call it a kiss. That is so them. Fighting then bam, but acting like it never happened. Ha. Wonderful. I gave you a 5 on spelling ^_^ Hell, I give ME a 5 on spelling ^_^ Power to the illiterates!! You're so goofy. You totally got my name wrong *laughs ass off* Shit, see what you made me do??? *haha* Email me.
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Reviewed By: I love fluffy On: January 02, 2004 14:30 CST
Comment/Review:
good
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2004 01:22 CST
Comment/Review:
suprize kisses are half the fun. becides i thought it fit in perfectly there. oh and i give you a medle for that sess in the shower bit. um. yum! up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: katz21 On: January 01, 2004 16:04 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! oh, and by the way, great fic...... a few spelling errors, but hey, we're not all perfect right? eh.....i guess i can stop talking now......er.... typing lol.....anywaz.... yeah. update!!!
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 31, 2003 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just update faster and i'll give a straight row of tens!
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...this is what's that word....interesting. It's also VERY FUNNY! "Helpful Hint"= Bastard not 'basterd'. Sorry I just had to tell you that. Okay that's enough. Update soon. ~Ciao
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Reviewed By: B.W. authoress On: December 31, 2003 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is soooooo good!!! I was totally cracking up while reading it. I was gasping for Oxygen. (I am not a dork) anyways, please update! You must be a full fledged demon to write so well! (Warning: this is a complenent not an inslute.Please be nice.). -widow ^_^
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Reviewed By: tuna On: December 21, 2003 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
sucks
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Title: U should write more
Reviewed By: pleaseplease3uo934u594 On: December 21, 2003 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
So uh yah u should write more its good and i found this fanfic from ur friend burcak she told me u wrote it umm and i am in ur orchestra class and although u hate me would u do the honor of goin out with me at least on a pity date. oh yah this is the person u call Royce. if thats what u wanna call me go ahead. Chow
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is to cute!!! Update faster please!!! And you are so right Fluffy-chan(Sesshomaru) is way to cute!!! Please hurry and get Fluffy/Rin, Kagome/Inuyasha, and Miroku/Sango together!!! I'm starting to go crazy!!! Email me anytime at inumoon3@yahoo.com!!! And by the way I ahve a couple of sailormoon stories out be sure to visit and review, maybe^_^!!!
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Reviewed By: AyLee Cambell On: December 19, 2003 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really pay attention to spell and grammar (I'm not the best at it and I get what your saying so why should I care?) I really like your story and I hope you keep writing. there was something I wanted you to know though. Zero eighteen hundred hours - well it isn't possible. (how do i explain this?) zero is for AM (1AM to 9AM) than it's ten hundred hours and so forth untill 1PM - which than turns to Thirteen hundred hours than so forth untill 12PM (which is twentyfour hundred.) Sorry but I HAD to point that out - I'm in ROTC (Researve Officer Training Corps)so if you have any military type questions I'd be happy to answer - Email is aleecams@hotmail.com - I really like fanfic so please continue!
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Reviewed By: Burtree On: December 19, 2003 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI LOSER!!!!!!!!! I READ WAT U WROTE BOUT ME. U SICK BASTERD. I DON'T FEEL COMFORTANLE WIT PEOPLE KNOWING HOW STUPID I'AM. AND UR WEIRD. WEIRDO. ANYWAY I SEE Y UR MY FRIEND. U STUPID BITCH. ITS TO MAKE URSELF FEEL SMART. WELL IT'S NOT WORKING. WEIRDO!!!!!!!!!!!1
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