| "Military Warfare" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...this is what's that word....interesting. It's also VERY FUNNY! "Helpful Hint"= Bastard not 'basterd'. Sorry I just had to tell you that. Okay that's enough. Update soon. ~Ciao
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Reviewed By: B.W. authoress On: December 31, 2003 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is soooooo good!!! I was totally cracking up while reading it. I was gasping for Oxygen. (I am not a dork) anyways, please update! You must be a full fledged demon to write so well! (Warning: this is a complenent not an inslute.Please be nice.). -widow ^_^
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Reviewed By: tuna On: December 21, 2003 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
sucks
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Title: U should write more
Reviewed By: pleaseplease3uo934u594 On: December 21, 2003 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
So uh yah u should write more its good and i found this fanfic from ur friend burcak she told me u wrote it umm and i am in ur orchestra class and although u hate me would u do the honor of goin out with me at least on a pity date. oh yah this is the person u call Royce. if thats what u wanna call me go ahead. Chow
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is to cute!!! Update faster please!!! And you are so right Fluffy-chan(Sesshomaru) is way to cute!!! Please hurry and get Fluffy/Rin, Kagome/Inuyasha, and Miroku/Sango together!!! I'm starting to go crazy!!! Email me anytime at inumoon3@yahoo.com!!! And by the way I ahve a couple of sailormoon stories out be sure to visit and review, maybe^_^!!!
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Reviewed By: AyLee Cambell On: December 19, 2003 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really pay attention to spell and grammar (I'm not the best at it and I get what your saying so why should I care?) I really like your story and I hope you keep writing. there was something I wanted you to know though. Zero eighteen hundred hours - well it isn't possible. (how do i explain this?) zero is for AM (1AM to 9AM) than it's ten hundred hours and so forth untill 1PM - which than turns to Thirteen hundred hours than so forth untill 12PM (which is twentyfour hundred.) Sorry but I HAD to point that out - I'm in ROTC (Researve Officer Training Corps)so if you have any military type questions I'd be happy to answer - Email is aleecams@hotmail.com - I really like fanfic so please continue!
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Reviewed By: Burtree On: December 19, 2003 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI LOSER!!!!!!!!! I READ WAT U WROTE BOUT ME. U SICK BASTERD. I DON'T FEEL COMFORTANLE WIT PEOPLE KNOWING HOW STUPID I'AM. AND UR WEIRD. WEIRDO. ANYWAY I SEE Y UR MY FRIEND. U STUPID BITCH. ITS TO MAKE URSELF FEEL SMART. WELL IT'S NOT WORKING. WEIRDO!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: sango9540 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! good fic!! military camp u make it sound like they did something wrong!! lol and i totally agree with u about the shoe thing!! ne thing else would have been stupid!! but shoes especially boots make it interesting!! lol!! tell ur damn friend 2 give u back ur damn book so u can update! i must know what happens!!! so please please please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 01:40 CST
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(:-/ hehe s'ok. ^-^
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 19:23 CST
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as long as it gets updated eventually I don't care. hope you don't do anything too drastic. have fun, and update when you can
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Reviewed By: Ill Matics On: December 14, 2003 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo yo its Sam. I decided to write one since you gettin all hype ova them. So ima give you yo propz. As i said before i liked your story. Its mad hot and funny. GET YOUR BOOK BACK FORM DANNIELLE. I will help you. As you see everyone is waitin. So anyway its of da sheezy. Keep doin ya writin thing da stories are ill. Word life from Sam.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 01:39 CST
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kagome is soo lucky! haven't the slightest clue on what's a romantic gift for guys. last i checked more guys weren't all that big on romance. i don't know calone? nehoo, up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is kawaii and I think the perfect christmas gift to give a guy is Jerseys or maybe watch that is very expensive!!! Well anyway update soon cause I can't wait to read when Sessho-chan and Rin-chan get together so update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: vivian On: December 12, 2003 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great story! the thing that i think is the most romantic gift to give a guy is home baked cookies? like they say "you get a man by stomach or food whatever!" if it doesn't work don't kill me....yet good luck on the gift thing! or maybe if it works out you can reward us by an update! but really good luck!
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 13:38 CST
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awesome story, and as far as the christmas gift...i like swords, so i think that a sword would be a good gift. or maybe just something weird. Miroku must seriously have some high pain tolerance going for him or something. please update soon.
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