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Title: Lol, costumes!
Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen(NSI) On: February 11, 2005 01:28 CST
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Ahh... I forgot to talk about the costumes, sorry... sorta spacey right now @.@.........SHIPPO- Bridegroom... lol, so uncreative, yes... KAGURA- Bride... xD... dead bride perhaps =P...KANNA- Oh... hey... Pippi! Pippi Longstockings! O.O She can wear a wiiig... ^^...YURA- Umm... Yura...hair... hmm... Vampire... xD well... yeah ^^ No wait... a maid! Yeah... a maid xD Oi! You can make Kagura the vampire! *squeals*...KIRARA- Kitty chick, but a cute kitty chick... with a tight leotard... @.@... whoot, too many dots @.@ They should have pizza strips at the party... from pizza hut ;D And Boba... you know.. booobaaa... =)
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen (NSI) On: February 11, 2005 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, damn, I completely forgot about this fic. There was a big gap somewhere in your updates and I stopped reading fics for a while. Hah, I felt like checking out R rated fics today since I already read all the NC-17 ones. Your story was a the first on the list and I remembered seeing the summary before. So I continued from where I left off (chapter 6)... it's been a year since I last commented @.@ Awesome job, never realized that you were the one the wrote Last Song, that one's in my favorites xD Just realized how weird you were... well... how more weird you were. And damn, I LOVE Yoohoos- most awesome drinks in the world I say! Way better than Milo or Hersheys Chocolate ^______^ Oh, rating from last year's going up xD
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 18:40 CST
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shippo-a butterfly kagura- a goddess kanna- a white bunnie rabbit (or a playboy thing w/o the leotard yura- something really really slutty like a bkaini 10 sizes tooooooo small or sumtin or just a thong kiara- kitty like the play boy chick xcept with cat ears and a cat tail ^-^
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shippo- the obvious; a full-body fox costume! Kagura- maybe a feudal era's respected Lady? Like with a traditional Kimono.. Kanna- a japanese ghost; you know, those ones that wear all white, has a serene glow to them and walks among the living? Yura- a slutty lioness! Kirara- a cute kitten; NOT too slutty though!
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Reviewed By: AO On: January 28, 2005 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love reading this fic, every time I read it I laugh so damn hard I love it, I'm going to be sad when you Finnish it though, but I still can't wait till the next update so update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Penthesileia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 19:45 CST
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i love this fanfic! imy brothers been coming in my room to see what i'm laughing so hard about.can you make the girly guy and kikyo date, and then have one of the counslers are something push them in the lake? and than maybe a slug or a frog or tapole or something could crawl up kikyos ear. please?
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 22, 2005 20:50 CST
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Um, yes I see what you mean...there are some strange people out there aren't there... Excellent chapter. So, Miroku and Sango together at last. All the others pretty much sorted out and Inuyasha and Kgome still not getting anywhere. I only hope they can deal with the girly man and zombie bitch. I think those two deserve each other. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FUCK YA IV BEEN WATING 4 EVEA OK U HAD BETTEA FUCKING MAKE INU AND KAGGIE SCREW EACHOTHER I MEAN EVERY 1 ELSE HAS FUCKED ALREADY SO THEY SHOULD 2 AND CAN U PLEAZ MAKE THAT HO NAMED KIKYO (hey i rhymed) GET RUN OVER BY A TRUCK OF FUCKED 2 DEATH BY NARAKU ALREADY I MEAN NARAKU IZ HOT AND KIKYO IZ NOT (hey i rhymed again) BUT STILL WHY THE HELL WONT SHE DIE ALREADY I DONT CARE HOW ALL I WANT IS FOR HER 2 DIE NOW (*sigh* another rhyme) ANY WHO IF U DONT UPDATE AS SOON AS FUCKING POSSIABLE I SWEAR ON ALL THINGS HOLY (yayaya i cant spell so what) THAT I WILL (*takes 10 min 2 think up an idea*) UH................................... *GRABS INU-CHAN, YOKO-CHAN* (wat iz it w/ me and guyz w/ earz) MAKE THAM KILL U (ha take that u fucked up lawyers (no affense 2 ne1)(dont ask inside joke)) BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA (u get the point) NE WAYZ UPDATE SOON AND ALSO FOR THE WIERD SMELLY LADY (i 4get her name)Y DONT U JUST PAIR HER UP W/ HOMO..... I MEAN HOHO..... NO THATS NOT RIT..... OH YA HOJO, :3 EATHER THAT OR A FAT SMELLY OLD GUY THATS BLIND ^-^ JA NE
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Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 18:41 CST
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Yay, you're back! tres fabu chapter, I loved it and i hope you update soon.
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Title: ='(
Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 07:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz, plzzzzz update!! don't abandon us!! lol...u wouldnt, right? i mean, its mean!!! lol im just kidding...but please update soon!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 18:25 CDT
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update!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 12:57 CDT
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I love this fic, but yoy haven't updated in months, please say you haven't abandoned it!
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Reviewed By: Missy Manda On: September 26, 2004 04:28 CDT
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oh ya me again...I REMEMBER NOW! make kikyou get it on with naraku and both fall into da lake and drown...or falling off a cliff while screwing each other could work...but thats more mindless ranting so ya good morning:P
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Reviewed By: Missy Manda On: September 26, 2004 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg ur my hero...keep writing this story...AND HURRY UP!holy shit it almost 3:30...and i have to be up at7:00 psh i should go to bed....so like update soon and ya...i think thats it...too tired to remember everything so ya ANYWHO keep writing...ya thats all
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Reviewed By: sapposed to be Hiei81 On: September 07, 2004 02:00 CDT
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Keep it going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chapie! Chapie! Chapie! Me like new chapie! lol! (I need a life)
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